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Well, I'd be interested in seeing how the scene when Nathan comes for Steven's ass later that night plays out. And maybe, learn a little more about the relationship between the two brothers. Future chapters could include some background as to how the sexual relationship between them started, maybe in flashbacks, or one or both reflecting back, especially since it was mentioned Nathan's going off to college soon. Might be interesting to for them to get into how much of their relationship is sexual versus emotional. Or touching on the future, if/how things will continue between them once the older one is in college. Just some suggestions. Feel free to ignore any or all.