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Wow, this is incredible. I read this a few weeks ago, but I thought it was going to be just a small bit, so I didn't review.

I like the style of your writing; it reminds me of my own, with a lot of details and inner dialogue that fleshes out the character more than just a wham-bam-thank-you-mam quick read.

I like the main character(I can't remember if you gave her a name or not, but I like to think you said she's Carrie, or Carly, or something along those lines), but I enjoy Maggie quite a bit too. She reminds me of the best friend to the heroine who never gets to be quite as awesome, but she still gets her own recognition. I would like her to find a nice xeno who starts to care about her, or at least who asks for her specifically and repeatedly, even though she's not the most logical for breeding. Maybe a reptilian xeno, or one with a liquid-like body.

I read the other reviews and I have to agree with them about the pregnancy scenes, although I'm not sure how much detail should go in before it starts to sound like a documentary.

As for other xenos who could have the pleasure of main character's services, I think I would be intrigued by something plantlike with loving tentacles and a member that acts sort of like the Diibao's prehensile one. Maybe if you add the birthing, then the babies give even more pleasure.

Also, I would like to see a humanoid xeno female who has both reproductive organs(I think that's called a futanari? Or is that a hermaphrodite?). I was thinking maybe she needs a male and a female to reproduce, but I'm only throwoing ideas out, so I don't have any logical reasoning behind that last bit.

I will definitely be checking this out every now and then for new chapters.
silverlining.

I loved every bit of this story, I think the ba'gruh was my favorite alien..kinda made me think of an orc from WoW, or a Yautja..mmmmm ^-^; Very nice stuff, very well written :3 have you tried deviantart for alien species ideas?

Hey, I just had to say that this is one of the most erotic stories I've read in awhile. The only thing that could possibly make it more erotic would be if you included what some other people said, a little more details about the eggs and the pregnancy. I would find that amazingly hot and from the looks of it other people would love it as well. Other than that I look forward to reading more from you!

Interesting zeno stories. Thanks

excellent and as for aliens why not have one that looks like an elf but has four fingers and double jointed legs like turians and quarians out of mass effect just a thought keep up the good work

Read the first chapter, well done. It's funny how she's completely disgusted and blase about the whole thing until the drugs kick in. Kind of mind-controllish. I'm a bit confused about his anatomy though. I guess that's aliens for you. Will check out the other chapters, too.

Really loving this story! Always had a thing for aliens. Maybe we could see something with tentacles? And maybe show how long the pregnancy lasts, or maybe the birthing aspect of it all? Just some suggestions, I know you were looking for some! Thanks for sharing this! I really hope you continue with it!

you could always try a telepathic alien and go from there. or mebbe an alien that requires both male and female stimulation/penetration. that's all I got right now :)

I love this story!!!!!!! Wow, Very steamy stuff!!

I like this story. Perhaps you could do a alien that is more aquatic, something along the lines of a fish. Or you could do a species that needs more than one alien to get her pregnant. I hope you continue your story.