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I really liked the warrior character from a couple chapters before. I thought that you were totally going to go that way. he's awesome and the way you wrote him made him seem so much more mannly than any of the other characters. I too would like more about gestation and birth.

loving this fic! cant wait to see more...maybe something horselike

Hey! I love it. It's beautiful, artistic and tasteful, with logical reasons behind things that appeal to the thinking side of my brain. The other side of my brain just loves the erotic detail and lust driven escapades.
Although I had pictured the multiple partners with another idea, I found it was way too erotic for me to care one way or the other. I had thought that when someone requested an aquatic xeno that you had already done that with the Bogrru, but then I realized he was amphibious.
This worked out wondrously. It was erotic and intoxicating. A taste of mystery and danger, what with the whole holding her down thing and near blacked out sight. I also was not expecting another to come up from the depths and join in. That was completely out of the blue. Literally. 'chuckle, chuckle'.
I didn't want to add anymore ideas into the bingo ball, but I was thinking a flying creature like a pteranadon or a hawk(something fierce and lethal in any other circumstance) and when they get down to it, it's while he's hovering in the air or something equally as thrilling and exciting.
Okay, so seriously, I don't know anything about the hermaphoditic race or even if you threw it in because of my review, but now I can't wait for that chapter. I was thinking maybe she would have a thin, long tail with light red or deep pink skin with long, straight black hair and glowing purple eyes. I think that would be interesting.
Alright, here's your ear back. I love this too much.
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Wow...Just wow. That is exactly how I was hoping you would write the multiple partner one. And then you made it aquatic, that was way more than anything I could expect. It astounded me. I love this chapter~ Uh...I have another suggestion. Maybe she could end up with a creature that doesn't move once inside. That leaves her unsatisfied, so she has to move herself in order get something from it. The Xeno might be irritated or amused, don't know. Please ignore that suggestion if you don't like. Thank you for the wonderful chapter.

Damn straight Gn'hineh needs a fanclub! If I had it my way this would be some type of far out love story for the two of them. Anyways, I really love this story, its strange, its kinky. I came to this site on a whim and this is what perked MY intrest! Please do a story with a giant-like creature, that mates orally! That would be incredibly HOT! Giving or recieving, I'll take either or! Also, I can also testify that I too am curious about the birthing period, and is there at all any further connection with the "children" she's birthing? I got really curious with Gn'hineh and all. Post soon ;)

A alien species that have the underbody of a spider and upper body of a human women that lay eggs inside women and then spiner them inside a cocoon ---
A fish like alien that mate in water ---
A alien species that are made of slime ---
A plant like alien species that lay seed inside women's ---
A dragon like alien species ---
A snake like alien species ---
A werewolf like alien species ---
A alien species with many tentacles that it use to impregnate women's ---
A alien species that the female's lay eggs inside the women's and the male impregnate the eggs. ---
A Wildmutt like alien from Ben 10 ---
A Upgrade like alien from Ben 10 ---
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Sorry, this is my fist time Review on adultfanfiction.net

I don't know about everyone else but I would love to see a conglomerate with all the different types. Either that or the aliens that she's already been with, I know I've spent a lot of time fantasizing about what those animals would be like when she gives birth. I leave it up to you, if you want to give us birthing scenes for what we have I'll be happy or if it's a conglomerate to give us a sense of what each one is like I'd be happy too.

That is definitely not a sparkly creature at all. I would like to see a bit of all the pregnancies if possible.

it's up to you as author to choose how you want it. I will say this though, maybe it's the fact that I've never been pregnant, but the thought of something scuttling around in my womb and licking and nipping at my insides kind of makes my uterus hurt. but I guess that's good on you if the description is that detailed.... still, the thought makes me shudder haha. and it would be kinda cool to see what happens when the eggs pop out, if they see her as a mom, if she has to have surgery, etc. that would be deliciously weird and gross and cool.

My favorite species' story so far is Ba’gruh and I do hope that in the future there might be more between the main character and him. He's super sweet and it's nice that it's not all just business on his end. Speaking of live births, I was a little confused when Ba’gruh told her that she gave him a daughter and she responded with "Is that so?" It sounded as if she didn't know it was a girl? Since I'm assuming anytime the births were girls, they would be treated like "a goddess" as Ba’gruh would put it. That's why I was interested in the live birth of Ba’gruh's child. Maybe from this second encounter? I'm assuming since it's all business the alien doesn't even come to get their child? But maybe Ba’gruh will since it seems as if he not only cares for the child but also the main chara? Can't wait :)