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July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was charming and certainly steamy. I can't help with any alien suggestions but I'll keep my fingers crossed for more plot bunnies to come your way. This will definitely be one of the stories on my favorites list.
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July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, this first chapter was one of my favs. Keep this up!
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July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while since I've commented last on this story, but you've still got it. I love this fic. I always check this section of the site, just in case you may have updated. This was a really hot and steamy chapter XD
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July 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I really loved this one! Its too bad they werent compatible, I bet he would have left her with one big egg ;)
Have you thought about a plant themed alien? Like with vines and a fragrance that heightens the senses? I bet she'd really like that. XD
P.S. Does your character have a name? I dont think I've noticed if it was mentioned.
Have you thought about a plant themed alien? Like with vines and a fragrance that heightens the senses? I bet she'd really like that. XD
P.S. Does your character have a name? I dont think I've noticed if it was mentioned.
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May 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Two words, "Hemipenis alien". Don't know what that is? Its a snake penis :)
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May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The poor girl. Her client is expecting more than one clutch from her, she is just going to be boneless from pleasure. What a terrible job. XD For suggestions, how about something like a pack? For whatever reason this pack doesn't have females and needs her. She could possible get a show while doing her job.
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April 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I was wondering when you were going to actually include her give birth. Such a long wait but it was worth it!
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April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey...Oh my gosh! it's been so long. Too long. I'm glad to hear you have more time.
So, this chapter was just a little too...um, perfect! I love the vivi-naha-all of them.
It was so hot and tasty. Not exactly how I would've made the hermaphodite-I didn't think about using the tail-but like always, you write so well there's no problems. I especially love both nursing scenes. They take after their parent.
I shied away at first from the stony demeanor, but it quickly heated up. After reading through reviews again, I know why.
I can't wait to see if Maggie gets a tattoo. Or if she gets in a relationship. I love this sooo much!
So seriously, don't keep us waiting so long again, or I might have to do something (like send a review. What did you think?).
Bye, silverlining990
So, this chapter was just a little too...um, perfect! I love the vivi-naha-all of them.
It was so hot and tasty. Not exactly how I would've made the hermaphodite-I didn't think about using the tail-but like always, you write so well there's no problems. I especially love both nursing scenes. They take after their parent.
I shied away at first from the stony demeanor, but it quickly heated up. After reading through reviews again, I know why.
I can't wait to see if Maggie gets a tattoo. Or if she gets in a relationship. I love this sooo much!
So seriously, don't keep us waiting so long again, or I might have to do something (like send a review. What did you think?).
Bye, silverlining990
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April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I absolutely love this story. Been reading from the start an always anticipate another chapter. Normally I don't review stuff, but I had an idea for an alien. While I might give a detailed description, feel free to pick apart and use ideas or body bits that you like.
A bit surprised that no one has offered some sort of tentacled alien. Perhaps they are a bit overused, but I find they can be interesting if you get creative with them. Another thing I like is two males fighting for the right to Breed with the main character. The strongest gets to have his babies with her.
Well I'll start out with a physical description. This thing would be big. At the very least twenty feet long, height-wise about six feet. They are a lot like reptiles in the fact that they crawl around low to the ground. They have six leg with toes tipped with claws. They have tough, leathery skin that come in a variety of earthy colors. Browns, dark greens or reds. From the neck to the tail their body looks lizard-like. Long body, long tail. The head however is very oval shaped with a wide mouth. Said mouth is filled with a short, though wide tongue and very sharp teeth. They have four eyes, two at the front, one on each side of the head. Just above their eyes and above the midline of their body is a hard armor like substance. On the armor there is short, blunt spikes sticking out. There are also a series of fist sized holes along the shell. Tentacles for mating can come out of these holes at will.
Said tentacles can come in various sizes and can easily lift a human. They create their own lubricant when aroused. When it comes to actual breeding they have "egg tentacles" that are transparent and lay the egg in the female. Then there are the "Seed tentacles which fill the female with lots of creamy seed to fertilize the egg.
Well...anyway that's my idea. Hope you like it.
A bit surprised that no one has offered some sort of tentacled alien. Perhaps they are a bit overused, but I find they can be interesting if you get creative with them. Another thing I like is two males fighting for the right to Breed with the main character. The strongest gets to have his babies with her.
Well I'll start out with a physical description. This thing would be big. At the very least twenty feet long, height-wise about six feet. They are a lot like reptiles in the fact that they crawl around low to the ground. They have six leg with toes tipped with claws. They have tough, leathery skin that come in a variety of earthy colors. Browns, dark greens or reds. From the neck to the tail their body looks lizard-like. Long body, long tail. The head however is very oval shaped with a wide mouth. Said mouth is filled with a short, though wide tongue and very sharp teeth. They have four eyes, two at the front, one on each side of the head. Just above their eyes and above the midline of their body is a hard armor like substance. On the armor there is short, blunt spikes sticking out. There are also a series of fist sized holes along the shell. Tentacles for mating can come out of these holes at will.
Said tentacles can come in various sizes and can easily lift a human. They create their own lubricant when aroused. When it comes to actual breeding they have "egg tentacles" that are transparent and lay the egg in the female. Then there are the "Seed tentacles which fill the female with lots of creamy seed to fertilize the egg.
Well...anyway that's my idea. Hope you like it.
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April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think I check this story like every other day to see if you've updated. It's killing me!
As far as something I'd like to see what about maybe a slime type alien? I definitely want some birthing chapters too!
This is by far one of my favorite stories here.
As far as something I'd like to see what about maybe a slime type alien? I definitely want some birthing chapters too!
This is by far one of my favorite stories here.