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January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start, but this story needs major editing. I don't see any obvious spelling errors but that's because you use spell check or word corrector program right? You may have the correct spelling but that doesn't mean you are using the correct word. Please take time to read your work out loud, it makes I easier to find errors if you hear them.