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for Sibling Trouble

by bob665

person mttmercado
schedule February 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i thought, that for like the first 2 paragraphs, it was a 90 second sequal,
cuz the older brother and the mom and the sleep over and the friend

but once i reads the names i got the idea

this is good real good, i dnt know if your gonna take this one forward but i jope so
schedule January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great story!