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Yes, there would be more, but you covered the most important one IMO! I love the contrasting white and black with the implied purity & darkness, as well as the nervousness!

(I do believe you are missing a word though as one sentence towards the beginning ends: "demanding total...")

She's a bit different than the stereotype, allowing the eyes etc, but you can tell that she's not one to be disobeyed. Should be interesting to watch this progress!

Ooo, where to start? I love the concept, I mean young men have been popping their cherry before going off to war for hundreds of years, so why should this day and age differ? The idea that they are going to a darker scene instead of a normal brothel for the 1st time is intriguing though and makes me wonder how the Mistress will treat them, especially the virgin.

I offer one critique though - As the mistress is female, she would be Ma Mistress as it's the female possessive :)

Thank you darling, I look forward to the rest!