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January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
veeerrryyyy interesting....
i think it's more, interesting, in the fact that, there was no dialog going on.
this no-actual-dialog written thing you do gives your story that special-ness.
it's odd yeah, but somehow, it goes. yeah :)
btw, this is one of the nicest 1st time's I've read. neatly done, in both ways. the focus on Jamie was just right with the way he monologued it. *thumbs up*
Looking forward to seeing more of Mr.Simmonds~
i think it's more, interesting, in the fact that, there was no dialog going on.
this no-actual-dialog written thing you do gives your story that special-ness.
it's odd yeah, but somehow, it goes. yeah :)
btw, this is one of the nicest 1st time's I've read. neatly done, in both ways. the focus on Jamie was just right with the way he monologued it. *thumbs up*
Looking forward to seeing more of Mr.Simmonds~
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January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow that was pretty good. I liked the 1st person point of view but i found myself still wanting to know what mr. sim felt as well. will you do one from his pov?
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January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I feel like you could have skipped that last sentence because you went from narrative to summary there, but otherwise I really enjoyed this. Nice length, too.
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January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay this was the twink from the hotel, right? I loved this! It was so sweet and I'm really excited to see him again in the other story!
I wish I could write as well as you but I'm a prude :(
I wish I could write as well as you but I'm a prude :(
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January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't think there are any laws against it, but the school board might be concerned that it would be unprofessional, and I guess it would be their call. The case would be tough since he's not a student anymore and he's a consenting adult, though. It would just probably look bad on Mr. Simmonds.
Anyway I loved this one! I only wish it had dialogue in it. I think once they got to the flat it would've been cool to hear those first awkward moments and let Mr. Simmonds seduce the boy. The sex was great, though! It would have been nice to see a little more of the kinky stuff they talked about on the internet though, haha. Good job!
Anyway I loved this one! I only wish it had dialogue in it. I think once they got to the flat it would've been cool to hear those first awkward moments and let Mr. Simmonds seduce the boy. The sex was great, though! It would have been nice to see a little more of the kinky stuff they talked about on the internet though, haha. Good job!