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by Laevi

person CelticThunderFan
schedule January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really should take the time to sign in when I leave a review but I am too lazy and always forget my stupid password.

Brady is not a slut or cock sucker! I hope that Chris and Lucas beat the crap of whoever is behind those nasty messages. Is that guy in the store the one who was whispering those horrible words to Brady or was someone hiding in another aisle doing it? Is that guy really Jayden's new boyfriend, but Brady never met him and thought he knew this guy at the store so not sure. I can't wait to find out who's behind it. Geeze, I hope Brady doesn't get fired for not calling in to work but if he is then I know his boys will take care of him.

I am one who likes drama so keep it coming.



schedule January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love the way these three can get along away from the bedroom. lol

I am curious though as to why Brady is suddenly getting nasty text messages and quasi-strangers are being rude to him.
person Kaylina
schedule January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and am glad I stopped to read it. I hope Lucas and Chris can keep Brady safe from whomever is texting him with those dirty threats.
schedule January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story :) I hope you have it to were Jayden says something to Brady aboutvthe pics while Chris and Lucas are there. I think that would be so funny. Please keep up the good work and update soon. :)
schedule January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chs. 5-9. OMG, this story took a left turn! I was not expecting Brady to end up with both Chris and Lucas! I LOVE IT!! The porn shoot and them tying him up and blindfolding him was so hot and how freaking sweet that they all love each other as well. But I'm a bit concerned that Jayden is going to flip his lid once he finds out that Brady is now in a threesome relationship.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is so much fun to read and the guys in it are so sexy and hot. I would love to have them as my neighbors. Jayden must have popped a blood vessel since he probably saw Brady with both Chris and Lucas on the internet. It's his own stupid fault and he had his chance but blew it. I wonder how he is going to confront Brady about it and whether or not Chris or Lucas will be there when it happens.
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Jayden is being such a prat and I am glad Brady slapped him because he deserved it. I do hope they move in together and get rings to make it official but I still want some angst/drama before that happens. I am interested in finding out who and what kind of person Jayden's new boyfriend is and will he be causing trouble. I am begging you to let Brady, Chris and Lucas have a happy ending by the time you upload the final chapter. It can't end any other way or I will cry and stomp my feet and throw things at my PC. It's gotta be Brady, Chris and Lucas 'forever'.
person Morgeth
schedule January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so totally addicted to this story, to all your writing really. It's just so good. Glad to see you're back.

Jessie
person Kayden Ess
schedule January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Laevi...I love this story! When I first began reading, it reminded me a bit of 'Sparky' (which I utterly adored). I'm really enjoying this threesome relationship as well, I've done it in a couple of my own stories. But Chris is still my favourite out of the porn star pair. ^^ You're a fantastic writer, keep at it! :)
person snowleopard
schedule January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just read this story for the first time and fell in love with it. I adore Brady, Chris and Lucas and haven't figured out yet what I think of Jayden. I thought I liked him at first but not sure now. So many times I get hooked on a good story like this but the author doesn't update for months and it drives me nuts. I appreciate the fact that you seem to be one of the few authors' on AFF who actually considers their readers and appreciates them for taking the time to leave a review. You don't leave readers hanging forever wondering what's going to happen next. Kudos to you for thinking of us and this story is amazing!