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by Laevi

person dazedandconfused
schedule January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, all I am going to say this time is, WOW! ~~~~ FAINTS ~~~~~ This was really, HOT! ~~~ FANS SELF AND TAKES NICE LONG COLD SHOWER ~~~~~~~
person CelticThunderFan
schedule January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what was in the coffee that Chris gave Brady for Breakfast. It must have been the caffeine making him hyper-active and that's where he got the courage to tell his bosses off. He was amazing and I was cheering him all the way. I am all hyped up myself waiting for what is going to happen at that club they will be going to. Jayden, you better hide your skinny little butt because Brady is going to bitch slap you to hell.
person snowleopard
schedule January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until Chris and Brady knock the socks out of whoever is behind calling Brady those horrible names! It was really neat how Brady told his boss and that lady off then quit. He was pretty cool doing it and doesn't care cause he knows he has a new job now with Mr. Monroe.
person Lisa
schedule January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe Jayden. Some "friend". I mean, get over it already. If he was really into Lucas, he woulda given him a chance.

It was funny (but not really) at Brady's job (well, ex-job now) that the lady didn't even know who he was. And they had the nerve to promote someone else. I'd be pissed too. He can make a helluva lot more just being a slut! lol
schedule January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story.
Love the drama and the protectiveness and possessiveness that the guys have from Brady.
Thank you for updating so fast. I'm hooked and your giving daily doses out.

Good luck!
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed Brady telling his boss off and quiting because there are days that I wish I were brave enough to tell mine where to go, but I can't afford to lose my job not with all the bills I owe, LOL. So, I think Jayden is in deep doggy poopy and want to find out what happens when Brady confronts him about it. It seems Brady has gotten some of his spunk back in this new chapter.
schedule January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wheee!! Go Brady Go! I loved that he told his bosses off! That was awesome! I'm very concerned that Jayden is somehow involved in the harassment Brady is receiving. He's jealous as hell. Here he's been gay and out for a very long time and can't have one long lasting relationship. And after being out a week, has 2 gorgeous boyfriends AND did a porn shoot that is very popular. He's become slightly famous. I don't know if it's Jay or his boyfriend or the guy at the club. But whomever it is, his ass is Chris' and Lucas'...lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person snowleopard
schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi, it's just me dropping by to review story again and say thank you again for writing such an entertaining story. I think it's Jayden and his new boyfriend behind the texting and hope they get into huge trouble when they get caught. I love how protective Lucas and Chris are with Brady, it's so cute.

schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Didn't you say your vaca is over and you have to slow down? Well, I'm glad you still find the time 'cause I love this story. Thank you!
~aditus
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, geeze, poor Brady! So, it looks like the person harassing Brady might be the guy that came on to him in first chapter but that we haven't really been introduced to yet. I hope Brady does get fired since he doesn't like his job anyway and then maybe he can work at the same health club as a Chris, as a bookkeeper or something like that. I like the fact that Brady may be in danger but Chris and Lucas won't let anything bad happen to him.