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for Just for play

by Laevi

schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awww, these guys are so sweet together! Lucas didn't cry my ass! I think he's more smitten with Brady than Chris which is funny since Chris is the one who snagged Brady first! lol.
person Kayden Ess
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Such a sweet deal Brady is receiving! Mm! Laevi...you must have some interesting dreams, eh? :)
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is this story already over? I am confused was that the last chapter? I was hoping for more but loved the whole plot and how it seems everything ended. Good job and thanks for sharing. I love these guys and they made me have some very nice dreams.
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 16: I am so glad that Brady isn't being really clingy with Chris and Lucas. He's still wanting his time alone AND keep his own place (for now.) He's so confident and sexually aggressive now. He's leading those two guys around by their noses! So cute.

And I'm very excited about Jayden and Ted's budding relationship! Maybe Jayden found thee one? I hope so :)

Looking forward to more!
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am getting sad now because I think story is almost near the end. I am so relieved that Jayden wasn't involved in all this mess and even met a new potential love interest in Ted. I would have liked to see the 'stalking' part with Jack play out a little bit more, like maybe he got Brady alone but before he could do too much harm (like rape him) Luc and Chris save him. I forgive you for not updating yesterday, I have been spoiled by your daily posts in case you couldn't tell. I think this story should be a good lesson for others to be more careful with social media like keeping certain info PRIVATE and be sure the people who send you a friend request are really your friends before you accept them.
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 15: Yes, it was Jayden's bf! I'm glad he got his ass kicked. Threatening anyone with rape is not cool. And I'm so happy that Jayden and Ted found each other. Keeping fingers crossed that they date for longer than a night!! lol.
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a psycho that guy was! Poor Jayden, thinking that he finally found a real boyfriend, only to find out he's crazy AND he only went out with him to get to Brady. What a sicko.

I'm glad Ted came into the picture; he sounds adorable! I hope he and Jay are happy together! :)
person Kayden Ess
schedule January 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The Ted and Jayden bit at the end was adorable. XD And I'm so glad that Jack is taken care of now! Poor Brady...and poor Jayden for being tricked! The bastard!
person snowleopard
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! What this chapter lacked in dialogue sure made up for with Lucas and Chris 'devouring' Brady. These guys are TIGERS. I LOVED IT. Now, I am worried though about the messages Brady left for his friends and on his 'blog' and the fall out from it.
schedule January 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 14: Freaking hot!! Loved it!