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for Just for play

by Laevi

schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3: It's still incomprehensible to me how people want to beat up other people simply because of who they love or who they prefer to be with. You seriously have to be fucked in the head to want to physically harm someone for their sexual orientation.

Anyways, I hate reading about homophobic attacks. It really makes me want to scream. But this one ended up happily with Lucas and Jayden back together and Chris and Brady even closer.

p.s. I am currently reading my way through the rest of your stories on here and I've been perusing your Y!Gallery submissions. :) I really love your writing style and your stories are divine!
schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4: OMG, this was a very hot chapter. I confess, as a straight married mom of 3, I too, watch gay porn. Hubby knows I do as well and doesn't care. All my girlfriends do too..lol...we actually email clips to each other. :)

But getting back to this chapter, I'm so glad that Jayden is going to try and have a relationship with Lucas. It'll be interesting to see how Jayden handles any porn shoots that Lucas may have in the future.

Chris and Brady are moving full-speed ahead. Things are getting hotter between them. I'm also curious as to what Brady's reaction would be seeing gay porn for the first time. :)
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I love this story and you are an awesome writer too.

I think Jayden is so adorable (he makes me laugh too by his antics) and hope things work out with Lucas so they stay together.

I can't wait until next chapter when Brady tops Chris....... I seriously didn't think Chris would bottom in a relationship.

This story is yummy and I am glad I found it. I just hope that Brady and Jayden don't end up getting hurt by these models.



person trummell
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg your stories are super hot and i just love to read dem. As you can tell i am a huge fan and i cant wait to read any other stories you have out. Brady and Chirs are a real hot couple i hope dey stay 2gether
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1: Wow, this chapter was incredible! I really like how you have written Brady. I love the build up to he and Chris kissing in his apartment. It was very hot! It seems Brady isn't straight after all! lol.
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2: OMG! I LOVE this story. Truly! It's so freaking hot! I love your style of writing as well!!

Right now, I am feeling a lot of anxiety for Brady. Here is a guy who was basically a-sexual. He's admitted to not being attracted to either sex. And because he's only slept with women, he's considered himself straight. Then comes along Chris. A very attractive, popular gay guy who wants him (maybe at first because he's a bit of a challenge AND not a fan.) He gives in, kisses him and finds he likes it. Then he's all worried he'll never see Chris again. He's dealing with feelings he's never had before and starts comparing himself to a girl in the sense that he's not the one doing the chasing and pursuing. It's the other way around. And now that he's allowed himself to be caught. He's worried he'll be discarded like he's done to women in the past. It's really interesting to see him, as a male, recognize what us women go through (a lot of times) when we are dating guys.

So far, I love this story. Looking forward to more!