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Ch. 10: You are spoiling us with another chapter! I loved this one so much! Oh the drama between Jayden and Brady! I was squeeing during it and laughing afterwards! I loved how Brady told him how it was. And he even slapped him! LOL! Yes! They must move in together! :)

Please remind me never to be sipping on a cup of hot coffee when I am reading this story. I spit it out and made a mess, yuck, me disgusting. Oooh, Brady is such a hot little slut and just the thought of Chris and Lucas both filling him makes me want to scream! This chapter was so, dirty, and I can't wait to see how Brady reacts to the pictures. Something tells me he's going want copies for his own personal album. I bet Jayden going to become very jealous when he finds out. This made my New Year's day perfect!

Wow this story is amazing, beautifuly written. I completely thought this would be going on a different direction, with Brady and Chris as a couple as well as Jayden and Lucas as a couple, but I have to say it was a pleasant surprise to see the relationship between Brady and Chris and Lucas. I hope they stay together because that is one HOT threesome!
I wonder what will happen next now that Jayden has found out. Will he feel betrayed, disgusted, or just surprised?

Ack, I am so mad, I just tried to leave a nice long review and because I messed up on the stupid capcha thingy it disappeared on me so I have to re-write it. Grrrrr.

Anyhoo, here I go again;

I loved the bondage scene in this chapter and that Brady trusted Chris and Lucas enough to do it considering he is so new to this type of thing. He makes a perfect submissive and I like him better this way than being a dominant. Now, he has two dominants to pleasure him and keep him filled. I am looking forward to when they both take Brady and love them for taking the time to prepare him for the big event.

I was thinking it would be cool if a stalker becomes obssesed (sorry I am an awful speller) with Brady and then both Chris and Lucas move in with him and become his bodyguard of sorts to protect him.

I laughed when Jayden screamed at end of chapter and figure it's his own fault because he had his chance, LOL.

I will miss the frequent updates but understand your vacation is over. It will just make me more excited waiting to find out what happens next.

Uh-oh! Brady will have some explaining to do to Jayden. Ouch! I feel like Chris and Lucas will destroy poor Brady's ass if they both take him at the same time.

Happy New Year!

Ok, this chapter was super awesome but I have to admit I am a little worried now. The last paragraph with this sentence;

Brady had no worries on his mind at all, at that moment.

I hope that Chris didn't tape their private lovemaking session with Brady and is going to show it online to the whole world because I think that would destroy him. Then, what if he taped it without Brady knowing just to use as his own entertainment but Lucas finds he and puts it on the internet?!

Anyhoo, I hope I am wrong and that won't happen but is my own sick twisted mind having fun with all the possible scenerios.

Thanks for updating on New Year's eve!

Oooh, I just was checking for new updates and realized you uploaded some more chapters! Oh my gosh, I can't keep up with you, LOL. I like where this story seems to be going and I think it will end with Brady ending up with both Chris and Lucas. I am surprised Jayden backed out so easily but as long as he's happy, that's cool. I am having a nervous breakdown waiting for next chapter, Brady is going to be so debauched, LOL. The veil, I love it and can't wait for the costume that goes with it so he can stay incognito.

Bring it on baby!

I wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying reading your story and thank you for sharing it with your readers.
I think it's well written and the plot is very interesting and erotic.

Wonderful story Laevi. Too bad Lucas and Jayden did not work out. I like Chris and Lucas and Brady together as well. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I love this story! It's so great! I hope you update soon!