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by KinkyConfusion

schedule January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay the rubber was a little too much for me so I only skimmed through it but I can't wait to see what happens next! Your main character has grown a lot since the last story and it shows! I really enjoyed the twink scene and hope to see that kid again!
schedule January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whee! Loved this chapter! He does a "twink" in the bathroom. So hot!
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The part where the regulars at the hotel warned him about the freaks he should keep away from, well I was thinking maybe it would be interesting if he has a run in with them. Just a thought. Anyhoo, thanks for updating again. I am enjoying this story.
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Happy New Year!

Ya know, I really liked this chapter with the handcuffs and the roughness. I am in rare form today getting ready to celebrate tonight. I never knew I was so naughty about enjoying reading this kind of stuff, but I am.

Happy 2012 and thanks for updating!
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I kind of like this and hope you continue. Chapters are a bit short but that's ok as long as you update fairly fast. I hope this kid doesn't get himself in too deep or he won't be able to get back out, LOL. He might mess with the wrong guy who is really a sexual pervert out of jail or something.

schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Since this is just for the PWP. I'm hoping to see the rare fetish kink of D-anal-P ;) (That's if you're taking suggestions)
DP done nicely is GOD DAMNED HARD TO FIND!... but who knows, since practically all of the men doing the fucking here are content on their pleasure only. Bah. I'll just see what you come up with ~
schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2: For me, there are few things hotter to read than when the person is sexually free to do what he wants with whom he wants. He didn't know a thing about that man, other than he wanted to go down on him and he did with pleasure. So f'ing hot to read.

p.s., after reading your a/n....thank you for not including any animals in your stories. I just can't read that. Definitely not my thing as well. But any other kinks are welcome. :)
schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that's a lot of chapters. But seeing as it's one scene per chap I think you won't run your writing dry xD
I seriously don't know how people like you can write so much smut and PWP @_@ I struggle with a single scene.

Want more suggestions? I gave you one earlier already.
Is 'the hotel' gonna be like 'the sauna' where it's just like a whole load of guys taking their pleasure while the main guy just enjoys being 'taken advantage of'? Or will there be some 'give and take' partners amongst all the 'random men'.?
person POHness1
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story. I am indeed looking forward to the many sexy scenes to come in this Sauna sequel. ^_^
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED "The Sauna." And I know I'm going to love this one as well. :) Very much looking forward to the next chapter!