rate_review Reviews

i love what ur doing with this especially the more dominant partners and the way you don't really use dialoge, keep up the good work! oh and i would Realllllllyy love some DP its become difficult to find a good story with DP (that i haven't read) preferably with the main character as the bottom but i'm not picky when it comes to DP thank you for feeding us pervz ;)

I absolutely loved this story. My only wish would be for him and Jamie to fall in love and somehow become a couple, but I have a feeling that's not where you will take the story. I love that he is a top and think you captured it beautifully. Sexy as hell story and can't wait for more.

Love the last chapter. I personally enjoy the character development and I do hope that Jamie will stick around. I think you did a great job of writing the topping especially since the main chara is use to bottoming.

Having a friend and somewhat plot and character build up in the midst of all this PWP is really nice. I think you've done it well, with no name for the main guys yet xD

Good luck with the "dry spell" ya having xD don't mind my pun xD
Take a break and stay away from porn (seriously, you DO can get sick of it) and let the hormones play its cycle before it hits ya again xD

Wow, I'm really liking this story. I also like Jamie and the main character and hope to see more of them. Their scences are actually my favorites of your stories. Even if they don't become a couple or something they could still maybe occasionally have sex

I enjoyed this chapter too, even with the character development instead of the smut ;) I also thought of one other kink I like. It would be like somnophilia where the main character wakes up with someone elses... uh... 'bits' on his face or in his mouth or other orifice. Or the main character could be doing this to someone who leaves their door open/unlocked at night for this purpose. Just a thought! Can't wait to read more!!!

:( My first review didn't get posted for some reason. I loved the Sauna and I really like this fic too!! I had reviewed with a bunch of kinks in detail but I'm not sure if I can remember them all now :( I know I mentioned:
- Daddy!kink/infantilism (calling the other character Daddy and behaving kind of infantile or innocent during sex. the use of pacifiers or pretending a penis is like a pacifier)
- Dirty talk (lots and lots of it, mixed with other kinks too!)
- moresome (more like a bunch of guys each take him one after the other and then repeat no matter how sensitive he is after orgasm and then clean him off possibly with their mouths afterwards)

That's all I can think of now, but even if they aren't included I'm sure what you write will be FANTASTIC :) Can't wait!!!

I really LOVED this chapter! I'm a romantic at heart. And Jamie and him were perfect together. Just the right amount of intimacy and sex to make it extra hot. I thought I recognized "Mr. Simmonds" as another story on here. I didn't realize until this chapter that it was yours. Off to read it!

I'll admit I only skipped the latest chapter- BO not being my fetish of choice- I was wondering if you could do something like Daddy play, maybe something with a heavily-muscled Euro type....

I love your stories. :)