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April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Heh, kind of rapey towards the end. I wonder how the prince will react.
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April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love Elt, and I'm so pleased you're writing his story. At first, I was disappointed as I knew his future with Leo, but I love the introduction of the new Captain. I honestly get so happy when I see you've posted another chapter; I love the story and your writing. Hopefully, you'll post another chapter as quickly as you can...not that that was a hint, or anything ;) Anyhow. Great story :)
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April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, the whole social system of this story confused me....
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March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until they eventually do it! ON a side note, though, I am very confused with the whole "queen" and "magic river" stuff. Is there a shorter, simple way to explain it...for people like me?
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March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That is one sexy line to leave us with. I think I'm going to keep that image in mind when the crazy people come to the bank. Something to make me smile.
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January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that Talten's dead. o.O Haha, oops, sorry i sorta spoiled Talten's demise for those that didn't read Star Child first.
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
just read ch 1 i like Elt even in star child and the other perspective of Leo is really interesting rofl but i wish i could have seen Leo suprized face when he got his nockers noked rofl ok now i go read more =) so far so good
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
CH2 Elt is slow oh wait or is it he is a virgin hehehe slick Leo getting Elt a alcohol he's not used to fast way to get someone drunk looking forward to reading ch 3 *reviewing each ch before i go to nest one* ok now on to the next promising ch
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
CH 3 omg i thought Leo was going to jump Elt right there "something more then friends" u are an evil master .... i like it ^*,..,*^ looking forward to you next update =)