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June 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written and a wonderful story.
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June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
a proper ending. I enjoyed this story much more then the one where Leo and Elt were apart, I hope the nexte one wil show the little warrior( half brother od Leo) with Pyanna because I do love his character.
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June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope he gets his happy ending too. He has sacrificed a lot in this story.
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May 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe. Leo is seducing him *snicker* I love this
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May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
O_O Elt is OCD XD and seems vary shy at times i like him even more then i did in star child ty for another grate ch Ayato-sama
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May 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Continues to be good! Update soon?
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May 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
XD more plz always love your work
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April 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was such a tease--it ended too soon! I love this world that you built in this story, very intriguing!
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April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
chapter 14. OMG!!! OMGOMGOMGOMG! Leo's parents went down there?! I can't wait to read what happens next! Hurry! Update! XD
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April 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story. Well done. I love Elt, and the new Captain. Leo gets on my nerves a little bit sometimes. I've read Star Child (although I read this one first) and he can be a bit annoying. I adore Elt, however, so I can't wait to see how things progress.