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OMG. Cobryn is going to drag poor Nick into trouble as well. I can feel Cobryn's frustration and yet the situation between him and Quentin is kind of amusing at the same time. I can't wait to see if Cobryn will manage to get out of there without giving in to Quentin. Plus that Mitchell Shearer is such a loser. Cobryn should know better than to turn to him. Thanks for the new chapter. This story is like a ray of sunshine for my Sunday morning.

Oh my gosh! I am just waiting for Con to break in to try and rescue Cob with his 'guns' blazing, LOL.

I hope Nick doesn't get in trouble for even thinking about helping Cobryn getting insider info on Quentin's buisness because his 'girl' needs him. If Cob only knew how much trouble his getting involved with Mitchell was going to cause, but he just isn't thinking straight because of his temper and trying to get revenge on Quentin.

I love the Carnalli brothers!!!!

Hehe it really was Nick! Like his character; he amused me so much in the sequel. I was sorta laughing pretty much throughout this since Coby's temper makes me laugh. Wonder if Con will try anything. I'm dying and hoping VERY MUCH to see VEN in this. I'm looking forward to more.

Hi!! Well I'm back again to express my LOVE OF YOUR FREAKING OFF THE CHAIN WRITING SKILLz!! LOL WHY OH..WHY DO YOU CONTINUE TO TEASE US SO!??? nah but seriously can ur girl get an awesome as usual UPDATE? I am soooo jonesing for the next chappies it's NOT EVEN funny!

I have died and gone to heaven ~~~ sighs ~~~ I can't wait to see what kind of dastardly and dirty things Quentin is going to do with Cobryn. Oh man, that Quentin is such a bad ass and loved the scene in the limo when he was watching and waiting for Cob to make a move to escape. It reminded me of a lion watching and stalking it's prey.

He is probably expecting Connor to come looking for Cobryn too so then he can have twice as much fun with them. I wonder if Quentin will make Connor scream for mercy before it's over.

OMG! I missed Quentin...that sick bastard!!! lol!!! Can't wait to see what kind of trouble Cobryn has brought upon himself now.

OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! Oh how I love that Quinten!

Oh geeze Cobryn you are in such deep shit and your wise mouth isn't helping matters. I wonder if Con is going to come looking for Cobryn anytime soon.

I can't wait to read what happens next!

Same 'Mint" here as always. Just usin' my member name. I really missed Quentin and all his craziness. I'm totally wondering who that other bodyguard was... at one point I was thinking maybe Nick since he wore a skull cap in the sequel story at one time (I think) but he's Not a "midget", and I'm not sure if Cobryn was exaggerating the bodyguards shortness or not... he probably was.

It's great you explained what exactly happened to Coby, Ven and Con during the kidnapping since we never knew much details 'bout that. I KNEW right off the bat that the female was Cassie before you stated it was her LOL. I'm so wondering if you're gonna show Cobryn and Ven racing illegally and using Mitchell's garage like how it's said in Chronic Carnalli Complex. Also, I'm kind of wondering why you did not mention Coby's tongue piercing in Chapter 3 when u were listing all his piercings.

Anyways, please update this soon as well as Loathe Thy Neighbor.

I am freaking out just thinking about what kind of dirty things Quentin is going to do with Cobryn. He's really going to be mad when he finds out about him and Mitchell