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WOW! JUST....WOWW!! I was really hoping that Corbyn was getting out of there, but I should have known Quintin wasn't going to make it that easy.
I spent this whole chapter screaming and laughing out loud! he is such! a fucked up older brother! hahahahaha. but I was soooo mad about corbyn not getting his revenge, stupid empty gun.
If I had been Corbyn I would've thrown the damn cuffs at Quintin when he still violated Conner! MAN!...I was mad. lol
LOVED the new update!! you still rock! Nothing...and I truely mean NOTHING gets me going like the damn Carnelli stories!

so glad to see a update from you. so not what i expected to hapen but way hott. i love everything in cobryns point of view. if and when you do write a new book i hope its in his poin of view as well

Hey Passh! I was so relieved to see this update last night! I stayed up late reading it and had to wake up early this morning but glad I stayed up reading it. OMG; I forgot that you sometimes do REALLY REALLY long chapters for this series which I love! I wonder if Quentin was referring to the time that he raped Connor when he said he did it before b/c we all know he raped Connor which is how he got a temper in the past. I loved seeing Hanley and even Natalie! Missed seeing them. I really like Hanley and Nick! I REALLY hope you could continue the series by writing a story taking place after the sequel story. I'm too obsessed withyou and your writing! LOL I'm glad you'll update everything every two weeks at least; it def felt weird not seeing your updates as much recently since I was so used to you updating so frequently for awhile! Anyways, please update soon!

waiting still for that wonderful update! hopefully a long one! Wink Wink.

OMFFGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!
WHAT THE EF ARE YOU?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!!?!??!?SERIOUSLY!!!!!!!!
YOU'RE SUCH A WONDERFUL AND FABULOUS WRITER.
HOW COULD SUCH A WONDERFUL AND FABULOUS WRITER EXIST ON EARTH?!?!?!
HOW??! WHAT IS THIS SORCERY?!?!?!

WOW. just f*cking WOW.
your stories are all so flipping amazing.
LTN is amazing, the Carnalli brothers is amazing.
Just.So.F*cking.Amazing All.Of.Them.
You are a fantastic author, NO lies.
So fantastic that I am swearing like a sailor! Can you F*CKING BELIEVE THIS?!
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Anywho, you're wonderful. Just flipping' wonderful.
The way you describe your characters and how you write the story, is just outta the world.
You're my all time favorite writer on the internet, I swearrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.
I'm one giddy and happy person to have read all your stories,
and I'm proud of myself for discovering such an amazing writer like you.

Yourself and your stories are just so amazing.
Not everyone could write amazing FF that keeps the reader as entertain as this.
So please do keep it up! :]


P.s. I hope that you change the POV back to Alain's, because I preferred it from Alain's POV more, because he has been the previous POV-person, and like, I'm just sorta(more like A LOT) stuck with him as the POV-person, and not other characters. But if you decide to just let Connor be the POV-person from now on forward, that's cool too then. BUT YA, HAPPY EARLYTH 4TH OF JULY! I HOPE YOU HAVE A GREAT AND WONDERFUL 4TH OF JULY... LOTS OF FIREWORKES :]

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!! SOOOOO HILARIOUS! I love the new chappie.

I'm happy to see an update ! Thank you !
Naughty chapter, as always... ;))
Can't wait for more...

YAY finally chapter 6. I stayed up later last night reading this ch. instead of doing homework like I shoulda been doin LOL. I understand that u were probably busy so. Anways, damn what a great chapter. I wonder where the heck Quentin went!! What else does he have up his sleeve?? I'm in anticipation already; well, love this and love you. I hope you manage to finish all ur stories and such.

Anways, please update asap :D

been missing you like crazzzzzyyyy! dont disapear like that again ok promis? looking forward to the nest chapter!

I miss this story SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much!

So I hope you can please update soon!!

*hugs*