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for Shawn's Voice

by projectamy

person Nine
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Do you realise what you just put me through?
I was STRESSING out over these two boys!! well done. this story was sp perfectly written, the tension the anticipation... so perfect!
I love all your stories!!
person ta.
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Stories like this are the reason I keep coming back here. So beautiful and touching, I fell in love with the boys and couldn't stop reading. Maybe the ending seemed a little rushed, but it was still enjoyable. Thank you for sharing this!
person lo
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was just too sweet. That made me tear up and smile, great work! Very very impressive.
person Anise
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just how adorable were these two, I loved how even from the very beginning Ryan had that instinct to protect Shawn he just kind of claimed him and Shawn never stood a chance.^^ Ryan always seems to be the confident in control one but it became fairly obvious who really holds all the power in this relationship, I loved that Shawn finally realized just how much he was adored. One of my favourite parts was age seven when Ryan told Santa, “So yeah, Shawn for keeps, that's what I want for Christmas.” it just made me all warm and mushy inside :) It also makes me happy to think of them getting married so Shawn can officially be part of the family, although hasn't he always been :) He got really lucky with the Hannah family, they went above and beyond to make sure that he had some happy childhood memories ^_^

These guys were just such a nice (and hot) couple and I'm glad that they got a happy ending, it was a really wonderful and well written story I'm so glad that I found it ^_^
person Anon
schedule December 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are so awesome for finishing this xmas story for your readers!

I loved how Ryan always planned everything out, and the ending made me very happy.

“Relax, not now. I’ll ask you in three or four Christmases.”
“Just out of curiosity’s sake: How are you going to answer? In three or four years.”

LOL!
person shiyo
schedule December 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a sweet holiday story! I loved it.
schedule December 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely, lovely story- I just read it all in one go and for some reason my heart was pounding throughout.

I read Pack Dynamics and liked it a lot, so I was looking forward to this, but I had no idea I would love it THAT much. Thank you for this story. Really, honestly, genuinely thank you.
person kylee123
schedule December 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What an awesome story! The beginning did such a good job of grabbing my attention. Ryan almost let Shawn slip through his fingers. I am glad they managed to work things out.
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I dn't know how you do it but each chapter just flows into another and it's always dynamic to read.
person dazedandconfused
schedule December 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am on my way out to visit family and thought I would check in first to see if you updated.

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

I will check back tonight.