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for The Short Straw

by InnerDemon

person ILoveWyatt
schedule August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story so much!
person miles
schedule December 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow ! Your writing is really good !
I like how you take the time to describe all the transformation.
And the end is surprising...
Well done ! And thanks for sharing ! :)
schedule December 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a really interesting read. I was expecting it to be the usual monster/victim story but this took a totally different turn. Keep up the good work.
person Jodie
schedule December 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story was remarkably poetic and beautiful, which really surprised me as I came into it expecting nothing more than crack tentacle!sex. I especially liked the ending when the boy turns into the monster himself, it was circular in a way that very much appeals to me. Should I be concerned that dub-con with a slimy swamp monster turned me on? I think I should be, yes.