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Omg Free, you built me up way more than I deserve; now I gotta come up with something....hehe, j/k. Thank you so much for your awesome response! You're the best! :)

Unlike DaVinci; man did I crack up when he explained why they call him DaVinci! lol What a creep. And Ti, Ti, Ti, you can't threaten a murderer like DaVinci and then just back down and whimper like a little pussy. If you can't man-up, then don't threaten. Now what's he gonna do? Cower day in and day out waiting for the time when DaVinci rapes his ass?

Don't get me wrong; I feel so bad for Ti and it's obvious he doesn't deserve to be in a place like that, at least he deserves a better cellmate, Durden perhaps? Oh I had to google Tyler Durden b/c I never heard of him. He looks an awful like Brad Scumpitt, oops, sorry Brad Pitt. (he'll always be Brad Scumpitt to me) I know Scumpitt was in Fight Club; was Tyler Durden the character he played or are they two separate people?

As always, wonderful chapter Free! :) I was cowering in the corner clutching MY stomach along with Ti! Through your words I felt the punch, the spit, everything about DaVinci that Ti's so afraid of. You have a wonderful way with words. Puts the reader right there while it's happening, better than being a fly on the wall.

Looking forward to chapter three!

Have a wonderful Christmakkuhkwanza (whichever you celebrate) and a happy and healthy 2012! :)

Damn, I repeated myself with the Christmakkahkwanza thing. Sorry! Happy Holidays! There, that's better....

Free, you're back, you're back! :)

Well this certainly is not a light story. I'm curious to find out what Ti could have done to land in prison.

Looking foward to more! Have a very Merry Christmakkuhkwanza (whichever one you celebrate!)! =)

Great start. I'm interested to find out more about Ti's background. Hope his roommate or someone there will look out for him, otherwise it sounds like he's in for a rough time. Definitely looking forward to more :)

Hey, I just want to say I really like the start of this. I'm curious of exactly what happened with Ti; I feel like he was perhaps (and I could be wrong; I probably am) driven into committing his crime. He just seems so... guilty that he did it, that I feel like he probably didn't "think" it through, and maybe whoever he did it to deserved it...? Hmm... Anyway, I look forward to finding that out. You really made him believable, with his freaking out/guilt, that I felt like *I* was on the way to prison D: I can just imagine how scary something like that is!

I'm also curious about his new roommate. I actually kind of like Dali-stash; I wonder why he did his crime too... Anyway, you've made a great start so far and I look forward to more :)

Reading this chapter was pure pleasure. I love your writing style. It's fluid, descriptive and conveys just the right amount of Ti's emotions without going into cheap drama. It makes me actually see and feel the world you created. I'm very curious about Ti's crime since he doesn't seem to be the type prone to violence. I hope to see more from you soon.

Love this lots! Ur writing is awesome to read!I REALLY HOPE U continue it. Please update asap! I'll keep on followin' this as long as you update!

O yah! I forgot to inform ya Happy Holidays!

Interesting..........well I already assume a lot of guys would be looking at Ti like vultures after all My Uncle and a few of my cousins were in prison they told me that the weak and the "not so ugly" looking are preyed upon. My cousin told me a few stories that made my stomach turn, but anyways I'll have to see where this story leads too. Let's hope he won't be pimped for a carton of smokes or anything.

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