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Maaaan, this story keeps gettin' better 'n better, srsly! I can't wait to see what Ti did to wind up in prison! He can't ALL be guilty, right? Like, perhaps or maybe someone DROVE him to do it ( Ithink someone stated this in a review). Durden is hot! I'm PRETTY sure that he is the love interest. I used to think it was Da Vinci but now strongly doubt it since ya said something about this topic. I really cannot wait to find out what will happen next! Hope you're havin' a great holiday and have a Happy New Year!!! Please update asap!

Awesome story. I am scared for poor Tiberius. I feel a little suspicious of Durden but I hope he turns out to be okay. Da Vinci is an enigma. I don't really know what is going on in his head. I can't wait tosee what chapter 4 holds in store for Ti.

Chapter two...... Well Da vinci sounds like a bastard. It looks like hes' going to hurt Ti. He's seems very dangerous why did th guards place a scared new guy in with maniac like Da Vinci. (but nah he isn't that bad looking( at least the way you describe him. I like Durden though I'm wondering what his real name is, surely it isn't his real name right?

CrimsonWatersAlien

Chapter four....... You know Ti is really going to get sick if he doesn't start eating. I know he's nervous and everything but starving to death really isn't a pleasant way to go. No mater what they tell you. I'm glad Durden was trying to help there. At least he got a job working in the library. And I thought Durden might be a nick name :) I'm just wondering what his real name is and why it would 'give things away?' but I guess I'll just have to wait for another chapter to find out. I really like this story and hope to read it and hope you write it to completion. Sorry for saying that but I was interested in a few fics that have gone on hiatus and it didn't make me too happy. Especially when I was so engrossed and I must admit I'm becoming engrossed in this story as well.

I'm wondering now if Da Vinci really did it. I mean that would expalain his nickname and now I'm also wondering what his crime was that landed Da Vinci in prison. After all he is Ti's cell mate can't we know more about him LOL. He sounds dangerous and from the way you left it, it sounds as if Ti is going to be hurt. Seriously what were they thinking in sending a new guy to him. The way Durden says it...... I wonder if Durden ever shared a cell with Da Vinci. It seems they know each other and there is some hostility between them, so I'm curious as to why it is there. I feel really sorry for Ti and he should take Durden's advice not to look so obvious.

Anyway I enjoy your story emmensly and I look forward to reading more.

CrimsonWatersAlien

You know just what to say to make a shit day so much better, Free! :)

Thank you for your kind words; you always make me feel good. lol

And on that note: YOU MEAN, MEAN AUTHOR!!!!!! Leaving us like that! Poor, poor Ti, now he has to face his wacko roommate! Wouldn't it be nice if Durden comes along and saves the day? Too bad he can't get into the cell!

Durden was nicer to Ti in this chapter. It's like he really cared what was wrong with Ti. But couldn't Durden figure it out? After all, he's the one who told Ti he couldn't believe they gave Ti DaVinci as a cellmate! He knows what a psycho DaVinci is.

Ok, now I'm on pins and needles waiting for the next update! I hope I dont' need to take my anxiety meds.....

Have a wonderful New Year's weekend with your dad Free! And I hope you and your family have a happy and healthy 2012! =)

happy holidays - thanks for the Christmas special! It really showed the interaction between Ti and his dad.

Wow Free, you little note at the end was beautiful. Made me tear up. Damn you.

Ok, so we know Ti comes from a warm and loving home. I can't imagine how he could have fallen so far from that in four short years to land in prison. And not just ANY prison, a maximum security prison.

This was a great addition, b/c it showed us the love Ti and his father have for one another.

Can't wait to read more!

Hope you had a great Xmas Free! :)

I wouldn't have gone with 'Durden', even if he weren't supposed to look like the character, just because now you're almost drawing on someone else's character. (Actually, it was a book first, not a film, so just say Brad Pitt, rather than the character Tyler Durden-) You could have named him something different, and had character descriptions at the end, or something.
That said, I do like this story. I come back every couple days and refresh to see if there's anything else up, yet :)

Argh - my comment didn't go through - annoying AFF.

I really like this story - it has me by its hook! I can't wait to read more and learn more about Ty.

I like the way you write - its fluid and descriptive.

Ah - such interesting characters Da Vinci and Durden are - I hope things look better for Ti in the future.