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Its good, cant wait to see whats next!!

Hey!

Interesting so far. I hope he stays with Dali-Stash a little longer then his last person. This isn't oz. Right? :P

Wow, the 4th chapter was great. You really kept me on my toes till the very end. Who would have expected that the one to make it victorious from the fight would be Ti? I'm excited to learn more about Dali-stash and Durden. Happy New Year:)

ohssss shit, this story makes me nervous and a little be freaked.

Wow what an amazing chapter. Da Vinci probably never imagined that this would be his last night on earth. It is shocking even for prison. I hope that this will not cause Ti to attract negative attention because of the killing. I hope the Dali stash guy does not turn out to be crazy. The chapter was very well written. I could see every scene clearly and I could also feel Ti's shock at the entire event. How horrible to realize that you just killed someone - forever. I also feel like the guards could have probably stopped the whole thing earlier but they just assumed it would be a rape and they did not plan to interfere.

And a very healthy and Bonne Annee to you too! :) Your responses always put a smile on my face. Merci Free! =)

So....Ti is now with Baldy! He's the Dali-stash guy, right? I had to go back and re-read the chapters b/c I didn't remember who Dali-stash was! lol Can he be half as bad as DaVinci? Too bad they couldn't put him in with Durden...

I'll tell you Free: the way you wrote that whole scene where Ti was attacked was so realistic sounding; I felt like I was in the room with them. It's great that Ti's survival instincts kicked in when he needed them the most. I loved the flashbacks into what really happened to get him arrested. I'm looking forward to finding out what really happened. Obviously he was attacked and fought back.

Oh, LOVED the lines: He just killed his cellmate. That probably wouldn't do too well for his sentence. Hysterical! :)

Hopefully Ti won't have to defend himself against Dali-stash!

Looking forward to the next update Free! :)

This chappie was scary. Wasnt expectin' what happened! Glad Ti didn't get hurt at least. I hope that Dali-stash is at least a decent cellmate. Cant wait to read more of this - this story is intriguing and exciting.

Update asap.

Thanks for the update - Happy 2012.

Well at least Ti was able to fight off Da Vinci and survive - even if he did have to kill Da Vinci - I liked how you incorporated some of Ti's past into the chapter as flashbacks - I wonder what happened to Ti...

Yay Ti protected himself :) Wow he's the first to fight Da Vinci? Da vinci shouldn't have died he should have been punished and instead he died,but that's okay Ti did what he had to do. That officer was nice to make it self-defense....which is was. How can they try to plant manslaughter and get Ti killed when it was done out of self defense? Urge

Yipee it's Dali-stash. I kind of liked him. Your not gonna make him all sadistic like Da vinci are you? Your story is great so far and I look forward to another chappie.

No! What a cliff hanger!

Looks like Ti might be in trouble now - looks like Da Vinci is going to make good on his promise.

Wantabe is an interesting character.