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for What Happens in Prison

by Katiesroom

person oo
schedule January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
fight club, really? *snicker
really, are you tellem me that he looks like brad pitt?
naughty.
schedule January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great Chapter :) Dali Stash sounds like a nice guy, a quiet guy, but a nice guy all the same I like his character. I do hope that Ti gets over it but it will take time. I was hoping they'd be together but then that would just make the story a bit unbelievable after what Ti went through, of course he is going to have some problems.
person Anon
schedule January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So now the romance begins ;) Which is great, 'cause I'm not really one for psycho cellmates, y'know? I'm glad that Da Vinci is dead.
And well, Ti and Durden... hee. Can't wait to see your next chapter!
person kylee
schedule January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I am glad that Ti managed to tell his story to Durden. I am eager to hear what Durden's story is as well. He seems like such a charming guy. I cant wait to see what happens next with these characters.
person anxiouslyawaitingupdate
schedule January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Can't wait to read more. I'm especially interested in finding out more about Durden. What's his story? What did he do to end up in there and how long's his sentence? Please update again soon so we can read more and see how Ti and Durden's relationship develops. Thanks!
person oo
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
much much much better! i feel like i can breathe now. dali seems like a teddy bear.
and durden, hubba hubba.
person Lisa
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ya know I keep picturing T-Bag from Prison Break as DaVinci, but heavier. Anyway, don't hafta worry about him anymore, thank God. And I guess since Ti has a life sentence, it didn't matter that he killed him, right?

Which is so sad and so damn unfair. What kind of jury did he have? Certainly not a sympathetic one. How could anyone convict him? Ok, the guy was already down, but jeez, he was dangerous and as Ti said, he would have gotten up and killed them both. I guess he shoulda called the cops. But still, life behind bars? For protecting himself and his mom? Totally unfair. He should have gotten a slap on the wrist. He needs an appeal. He needs a new lawyer. Maybe his mother could start dating an attorney. Just saying...

So now Durden and Ti are pretty much out to each other. Nice little scene on the couch. Too bad Jo had to come in and ruin it. :( Damn her. lol And of course interesting twist about Ti's dad. Why did he lose contact though? Is it b/c he felt ashamed that he married in the first place? He couldn't face his son knowing that he had him and now he's not there to raise him? B/c he realized after all those years that he really shouldn't have gotten married to a girl? There really wasn't any reason for his dad to abandon them like that. Especially Ti.

On a positive note; it's good that Ti isn't Dali-stash/Viktor's type. Although raping someone has nothing to do with type.

Anyway...awesome chapter as always lovebug. heheh

Can't wait for the next one! :) And good luck in school! Do well. Make us proud. =)
person Mint
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is good. Please update asap
person tainted wolf
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update.

I enjoyed this chapter - learning about Ti's past...and getting to cuddle with Durden.

I also love Ti's new cellmate Viktor Alexander - he is definitly a character - I hope to see more of him.
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yipee Thanks for updating! I have been waiting for this story and every time you update it just makes my day! Yeh Da Vinci did deserve it but still...... anyway Dali-stash agrivates me, he is somewhat to my liking but he's like a mystery, I want to know more about him! It's nice to know that Ti can feel safe in his knew Cell.

When he was laughing like that I was wondering if Ti had lost it. There' nothing like starving, an' almost rape and lack of sleep to take a piece of your brain LOL. Now that he's with Dali-stash though he can get some much needed rest. And I'm so glad he's starting to eat again.

That seen in the library had me wanting to smack Jo, they were going to kiss and I was like yes! Kiss, kiss but then Jo comes in and interupts them. Ti trying to get off Durden's lap made me laugh as well. Then Durden hadn't tried any of that again. I'm sure it will happen eventually. :) Thanks for making my day and keep up the good work. Until the next chapter.

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