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April 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The smex scene was mmmmh, mmh, good!
The story line is fantastic!
The characters are awesome!
And everything is awesomely awesome!
Just... amazing, beyond words!
Thanks so much for the update!
And I'm not sure if you're asking that if you published this book and it made it through.
Would us readers buy it? I would, totally. It's worth the dollars, so I would gladly buy this.
I love how you transit smex scene into emotional scene. It was very, very smooth.
I wouldn't had done it that good if I would you.
But beyond all that, thanks for the update!
The story line is fantastic!
The characters are awesome!
And everything is awesomely awesome!
Just... amazing, beyond words!
Thanks so much for the update!
And I'm not sure if you're asking that if you published this book and it made it through.
Would us readers buy it? I would, totally. It's worth the dollars, so I would gladly buy this.
I love how you transit smex scene into emotional scene. It was very, very smooth.
I wouldn't had done it that good if I would you.
But beyond all that, thanks for the update!
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March 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love you with a passion, that was hot.... damn... I need more or else this PC is out the window..... ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
That was insanely awesome. You are a wonderful author. ;-)
Pretty please update soon! (With Ti and Micheal on top)
That was insanely awesome. You are a wonderful author. ;-)
Pretty please update soon! (With Ti and Micheal on top)
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March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hahah, never would have guessed what? That I have a kid, or that he's a wrestler? lol (Actually, shhh, don't tell anyone, I have three.)
Anyway...on the the chapter! I actually had this review all written and was on the last paragraph when I must have hit the wrong button and it deleted it! So..Reader's Digest version: I feel so bad for Durden, err Michael. What a bitch his stepmother is! Since she's an attorney, she probably had this all planned out from day one; way before she married Durden's father. That slime. And Durden's totally innocent!
Ha, and Jo! I was cracking up when she "coitus interruptus" (or however it's written) Durden and Ti! Omg, and then she sorta caught them again! And she knew exactly what they were doing! So funny! :)
So, although this chapter was awesomely sexy and hot filled with yummy smexiness, yes, your grad school should be your top priority now. Is it like undergrad where you have to make your decision by May? So get to it girl! It would be awesome if they had Erotic Lit 101! Or better yet: Writing M/M Slash for the Beginner. Although you are FAR from the beginner (as this story should prove to the readers who haven't read your other amazing works) OMG, YOU could TEACH this course! And the best part: you'd get paid for it too! Imagine that, writing gay porn and getting PAID for it! :)
Anyway, go figure out where you're going so you can get back to Ti and Durden. No rush tho Free; take your time; this decision shouldn't be made lightly.
Anyway...on the the chapter! I actually had this review all written and was on the last paragraph when I must have hit the wrong button and it deleted it! So..Reader's Digest version: I feel so bad for Durden, err Michael. What a bitch his stepmother is! Since she's an attorney, she probably had this all planned out from day one; way before she married Durden's father. That slime. And Durden's totally innocent!
Ha, and Jo! I was cracking up when she "coitus interruptus" (or however it's written) Durden and Ti! Omg, and then she sorta caught them again! And she knew exactly what they were doing! So funny! :)
So, although this chapter was awesomely sexy and hot filled with yummy smexiness, yes, your grad school should be your top priority now. Is it like undergrad where you have to make your decision by May? So get to it girl! It would be awesome if they had Erotic Lit 101! Or better yet: Writing M/M Slash for the Beginner. Although you are FAR from the beginner (as this story should prove to the readers who haven't read your other amazing works) OMG, YOU could TEACH this course! And the best part: you'd get paid for it too! Imagine that, writing gay porn and getting PAID for it! :)
Anyway, go figure out where you're going so you can get back to Ti and Durden. No rush tho Free; take your time; this decision shouldn't be made lightly.
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March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Definitely still interested! XD
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March 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Let me start by saying i hate rape fics. If i see a rape warning i ignore the fic. I've read all of your other originals and some of your other works and liked them a lot. So i found myself thinking maybe the story will make up for the rape and it will be given enough warning that i can skip the actual rape scene so i won't have nightmares about it later, and I started reading. I really like ti so far and want to get to know him better. Looking forward to finding out what set of circumstances drove him to this point. Durden is an enigma at this point and Da Vinci needs a good shanking. nough said
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March 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay for shanking the bastard! and goody for the none rape of ti. Although i guess the rape was in the past? Looking forward to the next chapters with more enthusiasm.
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March 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ah consensual prison sex. Is there anything hotter?
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March 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WOw it is cool finally learning about Durden. WOnder if we'll find out more.. I hope so. I am predicting Ti will get out of prison and then will bail Durden out somehow or maybe they'll break out of prison. Well update asap!
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March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
O.O
Oh my gosh - thanks so much for the lovely update! I really enjoyed reading about Durden's past - and seeing him vulnerable. But the sex - that was so hot and well-written - I love the serious to it and the humor in it as well. And Jo - I'm so glad she didn't seem worried about Ti and Durden.
“I just got in. Noticed he was stuck, so we managed to… unstick it. He pushed. I pulled." --- This sentence was so amusing and hilarious - total inneundo!
Oh my gosh - thanks so much for the lovely update! I really enjoyed reading about Durden's past - and seeing him vulnerable. But the sex - that was so hot and well-written - I love the serious to it and the humor in it as well. And Jo - I'm so glad she didn't seem worried about Ti and Durden.
“I just got in. Noticed he was stuck, so we managed to… unstick it. He pushed. I pulled." --- This sentence was so amusing and hilarious - total inneundo!
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March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
CrimsonWatersAlien) changed my name as you can see :) I am so happy to get to read this! sorry about the wait to review I had to get my new computer up and running :) I loved this chapter very much! Now I want to know why Durden's step mom would fram him. Maybe he was ritch and she was a gold digger who wanted money...............hmm.......... great chapter!