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for What Happens in Prison

by Katiesroom

schedule December 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh my god my dear this story made me laugh but mostly i cried its so full of emotion you can actually feel them like your actually the one there i am in love with Ti and michael theyre so sweet together. i absolutely love this story one of my all time faves now you definitely have a gift keep up on the writing i hope this wasnt the last chapter because i really want both of them to get out they deserve to live their life together even if they are fictional..dearie you get 10/10 on this
schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, I'm so hooked
schedule March 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Megacon? What's that? lol But seriously, what is it?

FREE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I'm so excited to see that you're back! You've been a busy little beaver, it seems! Congrats on you being published. This is definitely a published-worthy story, if that makes any sense. :)

Now, on to the R&R: I had to re-read the chapter previously b/c I had forgotten what happened. And of course I cried buckets all over again. :(

I can certainly see how Durden, (in the current chapter), wouldn't want to get his hopes up just in case they come crashing down around him. And then of course I see Ti's side, where he found someone he could spend the rest of his life with and now he'll be out and Durden will be in there forever. And a big part of him wants to stay b/c he doesn't want to let Durden go.

I'm hoping he is able to find a way to re-open Durden's case. I'm hoping for a miracle!

These guys are so good together, even when they're not fucking like bunnies. Which is most of the time it seems. They probably have more sex than couples on their honeymoon. lol :) But I gotta tell you Free, the sex scenes just aren't about sex. I've probably said this in previous reviews, but with your words and through your wonderful writing, the love between Ti and Durden shine through. The way they look at each other when they're doin' it, the way they touch each other and look into each other's eyes; you can tell they really love each other. It's so much better to read a sex scene when the love just shines through, rather than a sex scene just for the sake of sex. Do you know what I mean? It's hard for me to explain. But you do such a fantastic job letting the readers 'see' how much these two love each other and they don't even have to say the three little words; everything they do conveys it. But it's only the way you write it that we can see it that way. So, kudos to you Free. =)

Cannot wait until the next chapter - I can't believe it's almost over!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
FREE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Is it really you? lol

I know you must have been busy at school; last we talked, err, wrote, you were applying to Master's programs. Now I see you've bee very busy doing all sorts of things. Congrats on publishing this story; it is fantastic! :)

Ok, now I have to read this latest update, just wanted to pop in here and say YAY!!!!! YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol

person bambi4real
schedule February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Didn't have to check back it shows up on the first page. I liked this so glad you are finishing.
person anon
schedule July 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while and there hasn't been any updates, so I will be removing this off my bookmarks.
But if the author one day comes back again and write,
YOU BETTER BE READY, BECAUSE I SURE AS HELL AM COMING BACK.

Until then, see you soon, one of my top FF!
person brandy
schedule April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that made me cry i cant believe viktor died or is going to die.
i still like this thou i hope you continue it
person Mint
schedule April 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good job. Update
person Lisa
schedule April 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Free, I hope you're feeling better. I want to congratulate you on your graduation! You should be so proud of yourself and everything you've accomplished in school. Not everyone graduates you know. Graduation is an emotional time I remember. Leaving the place where you've been for so long, leaving great friends behind. I know I never wanted graduation to come.

But I hope with graduation, comes great opportunities for you. You certainly deserve the best with all your hard work. Just remember: you can do anything you set your mind to do. :)

I know about AFF's rules on A/N comments. I actually am surprised you got away with it as long as you did. lol I for one am certanly gonna miss you wonderfully funny and heartwarming comments Free. You always made my day when I read your comments. =) You always knew how to make me smile.

As far as your poll: I would definitely buy any of your books, in hardcover, paperback, or by and e-book, w/e. You are such an extremely talented author and I absolutely LOVE all your stories. And of course you're like one of the top three talented smut writers on here! lol

Now, on to the story. Yes, what an emotional chapter this was! I almost ran out of Kleenex. I was so upset to read that Viktor (did I spell it right?) was going to be executed. Shit, him and Durden were the only two people in that whole place who gave a damn about Ti. And he really got a rough break. As Ti asked Hardass: wouldn't he have done the same thing if it were his family? And of course I can understand Viktor's thoughts; he feels he has no one to live for; his whole family is gone, so why bother living? It's so sad. Ti needs him.

I was so happy that Durden's Ti's new roommate. Hopefully it won't be the case of too much, too soon, you know what I mean? But now they can cuddle together at night after their hot and steamy sex sessions! lol And I can't believe they find places to have sex that often in prison! I was amazed! Really! Wow, who woulda thunk there'd be so many unoccupied areas?

I'm also thrilled they made up. And a little surprised they showed such affection in Watanabe's office.

I'll be thinking of you on May 15th Free. Good luck and CONGRATULATIONS! =)
person tainted wolf
schedule April 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update.

I'm glad that Ti is alight after Mario tried to hurt him. Poor Viktor - he is my fave character, but I guess not everyone can have a happy ending - but in the sense that he protected Ti and that Ti reminded him of his daughter, I guess he does have a happy ending in a sense.

I'm glad to see Durden and Ti fight - because it brought them closer together.

I would buy this book - I don't normally buy novellas, but if it turned out to be one, I would!