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December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling your a guy, your story starts out sweet and interesting, but soon their is an slowly rising underlying scent and reek of fetish perversion like a weird psychodelic mushrooms sending out spores into a hot moist jungle. Your writing is good, but the odd mood it creates, gives me a erry feeling and a bad taste in my mouth. If this sound like flames, it not meant to be, I usually like erotic and hard core sex, but for some reason I have bizsaar reaction to your writing...just trying to figure it out. If this is the feeling and mood you wanted to go for... you have succeeded amazingly! G