rate_review Reviews

This bond thing was amazing!!!! But I have the feeling something really bad is going to happen soon!!!! I can't wait for more!!!! See you again soon !!!

Hiya!

You are really good at writing. I love the flow of the dialogue - very good flow - and I love dialogues! so keep them coming. I just read until chapter 2, and will come back later to review later chapters.

And you might not want to believe me, but I think our writing style is similar. Or at least your writing feels familiar to me. Like something I would write too. But you somehow made them better. XD
Thanks for the good work.

I really like drusts father he is so otherworldly!!!! I can't wait for more!!! See you again soon!!!!

Awe that was so sweet!!!! I really loved it!!!!!

Oh my god I totally love this story!!!!! Its so amazing!!!! And I really love your Art too!!!! I can't wait for you to update another chappie!!!! I really want to know more about both of them!!! See you again soon!!!!

Hey, I love the story and concept and all, but I have no idea of what a "Hellion" is or what one looks like. Even with the descriptions you left, I'm still having a hard time picturing it. Are they some type of bird/cat/human hybrid or something??? Sorry about this, but I've looked around the web trying to see if I've been missing out on mythological humanoid creatures or if it's just one of your own creations. Thank you, and please, PLEASE, continue this story!

The subject is interesting and you know how to write (to be honest, you do made some mistakes, in spelling and not only, so be more careful before posting, or ask for help). I hope that you are willing to continue to write (this story and others as well). I will look for you and your stories.