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hmmm...don't think my review went through again! Argh to AF ~

*Feeds the review machine - crunch - yum!*

Looks like Cricket and Ellery have some talking to do - and hopefully can work out their problems - I hope Cricket gets some friends - she needs some!

I really like Iain - he's a character that you just can't hate. I really enjoyed the brothers dynamic in this chapter - it was well-rounded and included character development and information about their past.

I just found this story and I absolutely love it! I hope you update more soon, so I can find out what happens with the rogues!!! Great and engaging story.

Lol! This chapter made me like Ellery even less! Now we've heard Cricket's dad's side of the story, will we get the Rogue's side of the story? Poor Cricket! I feel awful for her! Now, she's being ostracized even more! I hope she gets away and make them pay for treating her like that!!! The Rogues don't treat her bad so, I hope she goes back to her true roots.

I like the fat that Cricket gets mad alot itll keep Ellery on his toes lol. I loved how she burned down the dias in the village, ha thats whatyou get when you piss her off. I am so glad that shes not actually part of that family. That 'Da' is a total jack ass, I cant wait to find out what the village is going to do with him. And the mother I mean come on she totally lied about that Rogue trying to sleep with her, even Cricket noticed that, so how the hell didnt her husbend notice!!! I cant wait to find out who Cricket's rogue family is. I mean she has some wicked power. I wonder what Crickets going to do about Ellery. *sigh* guess ill just have to wait and find out when you post next. (please let it be soon)

oh my gosh! I love this story - I love Cricket and all of her strangeness. Ellery is also interesing - I love how they bicker back and forth. I look forward to reading more! *Goes off to read the other chapters*

Looks like in this chapter, Ellery and Cricket has reached a impasse - but I think they can get over the small things that seem to bother both of them - Ellery needs to open up more. I'm glad Cricket is safe.

Oh no - rogues! I hope Ellery is alright! I must say that I enjoy the spin that you put on the "sight/seeing" ability. I don't think I have ever read about that ability happening that way. And Cricket spoke!

I'm glad that Cricket's visions were able to save Ellery - now we are learning more about why the rogues want to attack the village. I also liked how you incorporated Cricket's untrained seeing ability and her inability to speak normally.

I wonder what Crickets family did to the rogues. I also wonder if Cricket is truly related to her family - her Da seems like a jerk - I wonder if some of the things that he told her were lies.

Papadopoulos - so cute!

Looks like Cricket and Ellery are getting closer together - and are becoming more relational.

hmmm...my comment didn't take. I hope that Ellery and Cricket can reach an understanding again. Cricket really does love Ellery and I don't think that Ellery cheated on Cricket. I'm glad that some of Cricket's family support and still love her. I knew it - Cricket is a Rogue and her Da has lied to her. I really think that Cricket and Ellery have a positive affect on each other.