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November 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I love this chapter! :D I'm glad to see Cricket doing something than rather staying back and running around or something, lol. There's always a main character like that, but Cricket is so different! I love it! Great update!
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November 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and I love it so far. Da, I want to kill as well as Ma and many of Cricket's so called 'family' who smiled in her face like they loved her three months ago, but then transformed so quickly. That kind of betrayal is devastating.
I wish that Cricket could met some of her blood relatives. That would be so sweet.
I wish that Cricket could met some of her blood relatives. That would be so sweet.
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November 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome :D Just discovered this story, and read everything in one go. Now I can't wait for more ;) I like how you build up your characters very much, even those I don't like (speaking of Da ^^). It is however a bit strange how most of Cricket's siblings/family, even knowing the truth about her, always behaved like they liked her until that one day when everything blew up, and suddenly they hate her - but nothing has changed?...
Anyway, very nice work, thanks! :)
Anyway, very nice work, thanks! :)
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November 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOVING IN THE STORY! :D I'm hoping for an update soon! I'm into the charactes and the plot! You've written it so well!
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January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't really know what to say... But I just started reading your story and I enjoy it a lot! Your writing style is much more coherent and mature than many of the writers here. Keep up the good work!
Lily.
Lily.
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January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update - I thought I reviewed the last chapter...maybe it didn't go through?
I'm glad to see that Ellery and Cricket were able to get back together and work out some of their problems...but I wonder if Eliza is going to tell anyone that the marriage technically doesn't exist anymore...
I'm glad to see that Ellery and Cricket were able to get back together and work out some of their problems...but I wonder if Eliza is going to tell anyone that the marriage technically doesn't exist anymore...
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January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. It's funny. I knew the mom wasn't right but kinda sad you have it away so quickly. Is Cricket the moms daughter but just not the same dad as the others? Never mind, it's true don't say it. But I must day I've been waiting for you to add more chapters.
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January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't generally review stuff cuz I always end up sounding stupid, but since you mentioned that you only had like one reviewer, just want to let you know that I love this story! I think Cricket is very interesting and this world you have is fascinating. I hope to hear more about it soon!
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January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ellery is not climbing in popularity in my book. He's actually losing points fast. LOL! I don't know why but, I just don't like him. Every time he comes into the picture I just dislike him more and more.
Well, looking forward to ur next update since they seem to have gotten back together.
Well, looking forward to ur next update since they seem to have gotten back together.
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December 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Let the ostracization begin!
I feel Cricket would do so much better going back to her own roots. I think she would flourish there as a person.
I don't know about Ellery though. I just don't like him. To me he comes across as a weak man who doesn't really have any upstanding qualities. I like Iain though.
I feel Cricket would do so much better going back to her own roots. I think she would flourish there as a person.
I don't know about Ellery though. I just don't like him. To me he comes across as a weak man who doesn't really have any upstanding qualities. I like Iain though.