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Well I'm only at the end of chapter 3 and right now I'm not happy with the fact that I have to stop to put my kids down for nap time. Then I have a feeling that I will forget to eat lunch because I am too busy reading the rest of what is posted. Then I will be cranky for the rest of the day because I have forgotten to eat and it will all be your fault. Good job!!!

Well it's about time! ^.^ I can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh my goddess I love this story! :) I instantly fell for cricket and rooting for her all the way! I just hope Ellery gets his head out of his ass soon. Either way, I would love to know about the tribe more :) they seem pretty cool til pissed off. >_> lol keep it up!

IMMEDIATLEY????? IMMMEDIATLEYYYYY!?!?!??!?! WHERES THE CHAPTER >.<

lol, never mind me. This is an epic story, Ellery and Cricket are both so cute ( i love her name btw) and im sooooo glad that i took a peek into the originals section of aff.net.

....its christmas night now ( though i libve in australia) does this mean that when i wake up there will be another chapter??/

*looks hopeful

Ill make sure to check the originals section everyday just so i can find this fic and read it :P

-NekroKitty

oh wait...christmas doesnt work that way... *facedesks

anyway. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOON

:p does one person reviewing you twice count as 2 reviews? i hope it does XD.

But- i hope you update this fic anyway- evn if people dont review. I mean- this story is too good to be unfinished (even though i know youve written it all already

So I'm glad you're caught up.and I'm glad you're not making the story very long. So I'm thinking that everyone knows that Cricket's mom wasn't so innocent in the situation.

Dammit I love Cricket! ^_^

no, no I know Cricket isn't like that. I simply meant that other gentleman should take interest in Cricket so that Ellery can finally understand that Cricket doesn't just have HIS interest ^_^

None the less, Thank you for the chapter update! Loved it!!

WOW!!! i love your story, i just found it today, but i wish i could have started reading since you started on the journey!OMG!! you made her hubby dumb huh... well that's guys i guess -.-' i love your dance scene i had to read it twice to get the full picture and it was so worth it. i cant wait to see what developments are going to happen with the rouges, so many routes you could take!!! i have a weird image of her going with them and him riding in to save her, but somehow it seems wrong with his current personality like she should save him! lol i hope to see your next chapter up soon!

ARRGH!!! I want to get Ellery and throttle him! What a jerk! Ugh! Why must he be so difficult?? There should be a gentleman out there that takes interest in Cricket so that Ellery can finally see what he is missing out on! Make
poop-head jealous!

OH My GOD! Please please PLEASE update soon! I have totally fallen in love with this story! ^_^