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for Advent: Collected Shorts

by slarmstrong

person Kat
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This latest chapter makes me think of the song Love, Sex, and Magic by Ciera (ft. Justin Timberlake.)
schedule December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved reading all of these so far- my favorite is the triplets! So hot!
schedule December 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have read Rachmaninoff and Breaking Point previously(along with few other of your and Piet's works),so I was excited when I found this opportunity for more glimpses into the lives of those intriguing characters. Also, I appreciate the peek into future stories. I just finished A Debt to Pay and eagerly look forward to the next installment.

Phoebe Gee
phoebegee@gmail.com
schedule December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, when I saw the tags for this one, I cringed, because incest is Not My Thing- but I liked it a lot! Maybe because the POV wasn't from one of the siblings, who knows; point is I enjoyed that more than I thought I would.

Just one thing I've been noticing throughout, your sentences are pretty name-heavy, seems to me you could substitute quite a bit of that for some descriptor or other.

Other than that this was lovely as always, sex and heartwarming at the same time.
person CocoReed
schedule November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
For "Silent Night."

Nice pwp. I was intrigued by the characters and wouldn't mind seeing more from them. Thanks for writing and sharing!

C. Reed
schedule November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Oh, to write sex scenes like that -.-

I agree with the person above me, I enjoyed Phinn and Malachi a lot. They are welcome to make a reappearance!
person Merely Truth
schedule November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor North can't stay like this please ! The stories are wonderful, well written. Thank you !

A french reader
Bonjour de la France
Merely Truth
person CocoReed
schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
For "Icy Desperation."

Not what I was expecting for a holiday story. Sorry, but I was waiting for warm, fuzzy happy feelings. I am happy to say I was wrong. This story, while a bit rushed and just a few errors, was very intriguing. I enjoyed the ending and it left me wanting to know what happens to North. Thank you for writing and sharing!

C. Reed
person CocoReed
schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
For "Winner Take All."

This was a nice pwp. I like the first story the most so far. But this was just the right kind of warm and toasty story for such a cold morning. Thanks for writing and sharing. I look forward to more.

C. Reed
schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed both of these a lot and will keep an eye out for more, although after the first one I did think I hope they get a little happier as we get closer to Christmas. :P The second one was sweet and fuzzy (literally, ha!) and made me smile.