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I have bee browsing through stories today and found yours, I really hope that you plan to continue this! It got me hooked from the first chapter.

It's sad that Lace's friends died, but luckily he got into a better place with Onyx ;) (Did I spell the name right?) I like it how the blond elf like creatures were to vicious ones and these darker ones the good. I also like Shayla. The world seem pretty interesting as well! I would be curious to know more about Lace's former life, his family etc. And would love to see how this story plays out, will there be other dangers to face?

I don't usually read oringal storys but I'm so glad I chose this one to read! It fabulous! I can't believe more people have not commented saying how awesome this story is!! I hope more is coming!!

Hey. Just found this story. Would really like to find out what's gonna happen next. Please try to update again soon! Thanks.