errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is written great, I read the whole thing at 4 in the morning yesterday and I had the weirdest dream afterward that I thought I better come write a review. Your writing makes this story great your characters are dynamic and seem well rounded and complex and the whole thing just flows very nicely. I can't wait for another update.
schedule
December 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More please! :3
schedule
December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
(4) Oh, did you just edit and repost this chapter? Anyway I love this story. Haven't had the time to review yet, but I will for the next updates! There should be moer F/F in here, and your story is quality. Keep writing! Milly
schedule
December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh i hope so :D
schedule
November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this story since the other day. I've been checking this from time to time to see if it's been updated. I really like how the story started and how it has been going so far. I especially liked the character of Hot Doctor and the goings-on in Chapter 4. I hope to read more! ;)
This story especially intrigued me, by the way.
This story especially intrigued me, by the way.
schedule
November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
^^ again I loved it! Can't wait to see more!
schedule
November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome. love it keep going.
schedule
November 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
woohooo love it keep going and don't stop until the story is over. :)
schedule
November 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love love! Can't wait for more!!! ^-^
schedule
November 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
She makes the shot, up goes the ball, ~swish~ and SCORE! ;D Way to go, Hot Doctor. Well played. Good to see progress is being made, first date set an' all.
Also, Danny and Alice continue to piss the hell out of me, but at the same time, I very much admire your ability to continue to keep this very realistic and true to life. Some people seem to look at it (addictions, of various sorts) with blindsided disgust, "They could quit if they 'really' wanted to." But it's hard and complicated, and I think the way you're handling it speaks to that very well.
I'm glad Frankie at least got out, though, (and I enjoyed her internal monologue, lol). Looking forward to see how their little 'chat' (date) goes. Keep up the good work. =)
~Moonstar
Also, Danny and Alice continue to piss the hell out of me, but at the same time, I very much admire your ability to continue to keep this very realistic and true to life. Some people seem to look at it (addictions, of various sorts) with blindsided disgust, "They could quit if they 'really' wanted to." But it's hard and complicated, and I think the way you're handling it speaks to that very well.
I'm glad Frankie at least got out, though, (and I enjoyed her internal monologue, lol). Looking forward to see how their little 'chat' (date) goes. Keep up the good work. =)
~Moonstar