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I don't think the voy is necessarily creepy in this one, if only because the voyeur is innocent and unaware of how private the thing she's witnessing is. It detracts from the "sexy" and makes it more "Oh, god, that poor kid - someone shield her eyes!" But, I actually think it's a fairly realistic (and probably common enough) occurrence. Children just don't understand at that age what they're seeing, but they get the sense that it's private and embarassing enough that they don't mention it later.

Sorry for spamming you with reviews, but I just can't imagine having written as /much/ as you have and barely getting any feedback. I just...I mean...I /live/ for feedback, so I tend to assume that most authors do, too. I hope you get more other people coming through to drop some words.

~Moonstar