rate_review Reviews

Utterly fantastic. My one gripe is that she lost her vaginal virginity in chapter four (and that they had not had intercourse), yet he mentions that they'll have sex with each other in a game (including anal, and vaginal heavily is heavily implied).

The plot is great, and the sex is fantastic. Nice to see something original.

Maybe one more chapter, with a happy ending? (she admits she's not a lesbian, they confess their love, get married and have a dozen babyz [:)

Still, five stars.