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August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story so much!
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November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. The... poor people? At least they kinda died happy. Or something xD
You write real good. The flow is nice and the story catching. The end was a bit sudden though. I could have read more about it, following someone for a longer time. The story makes you want to know more. What’s really going on in this world? And I'm really curious about this demon King. Maybe it's just me, but I would love to see if there is anyone he does care about. Lol, not that I think someone with his personality can be a good and caring partner xD But it would be fun to read about it :3 Not that I’m telling you what to write. You go with your flow ^^
You write real good. The flow is nice and the story catching. The end was a bit sudden though. I could have read more about it, following someone for a longer time. The story makes you want to know more. What’s really going on in this world? And I'm really curious about this demon King. Maybe it's just me, but I would love to see if there is anyone he does care about. Lol, not that I think someone with his personality can be a good and caring partner xD But it would be fun to read about it :3 Not that I’m telling you what to write. You go with your flow ^^