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for Three Strikes

by DaggersApprentice

person Rainwater
schedule September 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sexy and addictive. I've read your other one-shots staring these lovable characters, and I must say that I would have loved to have seen them in there own multi-chapter story. Either way, thanks for sharing and keep writing.
person Tay
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please write more about Quan and Derik!!!
They're adorable and i want to know how theire relationship develops... ^^
person ILoveWyatt
schedule June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story so much!
person Boots
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so well written, I just loved it and loved the two characters. I look forward to reading more of your work. Always keep writing.
person arya
schedule November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you know what, I really really loved this oneshot. It was a little refreshing since it didn't have any teenage angst dealing with denial and all that other shit. Of course that might have come later if someone found them out or something, but i just really liked this. I'd like to read more about this couple too, and maybe involving coming out to other people and their life after high school. But it would be interesting if you could somehow portray all that without the necessary angst, and of course a happy ending. Sometimes it's really nice to read an easygoing story.
schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a great oneshot. Perfectly concise with enough details that I could feel each character as a unique, realistic individual. I especially liked the way Derik describes Quan at the end. There's something about the chemistry between Derik and Quan that I really enjoy. I know it's a oneshot, but I'd love to see more snapshots of their interaction.

Loved it!