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for A Kind of Alchemy

by Melsiebug

person addiena saffir
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
go Fran!!!!1
schedule December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I like Mulligan already! lol

Poor Sam, getting into it with Ed. And poor Fudge; what a hangover she'll have in the a.m.! :)

Oh, I noticed a typo: when the people were helping Mrs. A. into her house, you wrote: Sam was aware of a forth person coming to join them. It should be fourth, not forth. Unless you wrote: Sam noticed Ed come forth to join them. lol

Anyway...looking forward to more! :)
person Lisa
schedule December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah ha, is Sam now going to add Ed to his list of conquests? lol

At least Ed is nothing like his grandmother.

Loved the part with the parrot. I'm parrot sitting right now and this guy says "Hi Guys" everytime you walk in the room! Really cute!

I feel bad for Fudge; always waiting for her mom and always being disappointed. I hope her mom doesn't disappoint her again.
person uni
schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I haven't been reviewing but I swear I'm reading. I get so excited whenever you update :)

I like the name Edmund. But Ed's fine, too. I wonder if Ed is gay... hmm. Sam seems interested at least. I'm hoping we get to meet both Fran's boyfriend and his sister---who I already dislike. Dumping her daughter onto her brother? Wrong. Reminds me of this person I knew who dumped her baby onto her boyfriend's grandparents while she lived with her boyfriend's parents... without paying for anything (they were afraid she'd take custody from the daughter which she threatened many times). Anyway, so far I don't like her. And I wonder if she did indeed lie to Fudge about her father? Hmm.

Thank you for updating so quickly. I've yet to figure out which days you do, or if they're random. But I'm very glad we get frequent chapters. This story is really coming along and I actually like it better than Exit (the first story; I didn't read the sequels).
schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was amazing. Love the bondage, and Sam is so adorable!
person Lisa
schedule November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, well, well, Sam the wanton slut! lol He better not tell Fran; Fran will not be happy!

Victor does seem ok; he didn't hurt Sam at all and he seemed to know what Sam wanted. I just hope he doesn't take advantage of him later on and hurt him.

Great chapter; looking forward to more! :)
schedule November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OOOOHHHH, I can't wait for the modeling session! lol

I'm glad Fran spoke to Victor in Sam's honor. Sam really lucked out when he met Fran.

Great chapter, can't wait for more!

Have a wonderful Turkey Day if you celebrate it London! I don't remember if you're from the states or not...
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What did Sam get himself into? Ah, maybe he won't have to strip! lol

I loved the comment about the drag queens! Why do people like watching men dress up as women? hahah

Good chapter; I liked the description of the circus (?) people. Looking forward to Sam modeling (and not clay pieces either, lol).

schedule November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey London, good to hear this story will be a bit cheerier (I hope; that's what I interpreted the end of your A/N). It's bad enough Jack broke Sam's heart when he got sent to the orphanage, then he broke Exit's heart when he joined the military. Well, maybe Sam and Exit could meet.....lol. Ok, no. They both belong with Jack. :)

I do remember Elodie being one of Mother's girls; I did remember the name from back then. And it was Fletcher; right, did I write Frank? lol Can't remember.

It's good Fran found Sam before Mother could sink his nasty claws into him.

I'm looking forward to the next development. :)
schedule November 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, poor Sam! I'm relieved he finally found a friendly face, though I am enjoying the drama with Mother. Thanks for writing!