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for A Kind of Alchemy

by Melsiebug

schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lol, thanks London! I figured you were English due to the "London" in your name! Also, you add the extra "u" in words such as colour, favourite, etc. A dead-giveaway that you're not from the states! :)

I know exactly what a lampy is now! My oldest son was in all the plays in high school, but never did the technical part of it, although we both new a lot of the people behind the scenes. Now I know what the technical term is called! =)

Too bad about the reviewers, but how do underage kids get on here anyway? They know they shouldn't be reading this smut! lol

And please: NO VAMPIRES!!!!!! Your story is wonderful w/only just a visk in it! :)

I feel bad for Fudge; her mom's way too "out there". I think I'd be mortified if she were my mother.

And Fran did what he thought was best and he was "rescuing" Sam from certain rape, humiliation and degradation. So kudos to him! :)
schedule January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear that you're losing reviews. I'm sorry also that I don't always review, but I really enjoy this story. It took me a little convincing to be sure - I was enjoying the drama with Sam, but didn't get the reference to your other story and it took me just a little to warm up to the theatre characters, but now I love the drama and atmosphere, and whenever I see an update I get really excited! The drama of Sam as a bargaining chip thickens a little. We haven't heard much lately about Mother's plan to have a sex slave auction at the theater, but I kind of am interested in the darker aspects and am wondering if Mother will try to get Sam back. Ava is an interesting character but omg, she is cruel to the point of being irredeemable! Poor Fudge.
person Ceci
schedule January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story...It's quite different from others and very interesting.
I hope to continue reading it. Good work!
schedule January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! What's a lampy though? You wrote that Earnest was a lampy boy. I think that's what it said. I know your penname is London Lampy, but what does it mean? lol

Well, Victor isn't jealous at all that another boy kissed Sam. And seems to like him. I guess he figures he can have Sam anytime he wants so it doesn't matter if Sam hooks up with someone else.

I'm looking forward to Sam seeing Ed again. I'm glad Fran is gonna let Ed stay there if he needs to. :)
person Lisa
schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok, Fudge's mother is an ass. I don't like her. And Mother's an ass too; he better keep his greasy, creepy, slimy paws off Sam! :)

Ed surprised me. I feel so bad for him though. I can't believe his parents are selling the house right from under him! Where will he go? Can he go live with his parents? But they're far away; that wouldn't work out. lol Hey, he can always shack up with Sam in his room! lol

Hey, one of my stupid captcha words is Ernest! Without the 'a'. haha
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whew! At least Sam didn't take drastic measures and move out without anyone knowing! Glad he knows he doesn't have to pay Fran back any money.

Nice chapter; now we got to see first-hand how Sam's father really is: a prick. I didn't remember Sam stealing the brooch; I also thought his mother gave it to him.

Anyways...have a wonderful New Year London and as always, I look forward to the next update! :)
schedule December 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you can never have enough friends, right? And friends w/benfits is also good. lol

I had to laugh at their whole exchange in the restaurant; I wonder what the waitress thought?

Hey London; have a very merry Christmakkuhkwanza, whatever you celebrate! :)
person Lisa
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah, poor Sam. Wanting to get money to pay Fran back. Fran wouldn't take his money anyway.

I'm glad Sam is willing to put what happened between him and Ed behind him enough to help Ed out. I feel so bad for Ed; his parents don't even have the decency to come and help him. Wait, if Mrs. A. was his aunt, then she is either his father's sister or his mother's sister. They can't come out and take care of things; it was someone's sister! What a disgrace they are!

I'm sorry you'll only be posting once a week now, but I know how real life can get in the way of good gay porn! lol :)

If you still want me to point out errors in case you want to go back and fix them, I saw a few. Just email me and let me know. LisaT25@msn.com. I wrote them all down.

Anyway...looking forward to the next chapter whenever you can get it out! :)


person addiena saffir
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please please please don't let mother ruin them too much.....let him get his comeuppance quickly
schedule December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, I know sometimes I'm a pain in the ass, b/c I seem to be the only one calling an author on a mistake. But I can't help it; I can find errors anywhere. On my son's history project, there was a typo. Can you believe that? In a store, on a huge banner, I found a typo. Drives me nuts! lol

So....now is no different. Sorry, but I noticed that you write, "they were sat at the table", or something similar with the words "were sat". It should be, "They were sitting at the table" or "they sat at the table".

Ok, I'll stop now! lol

I used to love the game "Chutes and Ladders" when I was growing up; is "Snakes and Ladders" the same?

I really like Mulligan; he's pretty funny.

I'm glad Sam now has a place he can call home.

Great chapter; looking foward to more! :)

And don't worry London; your spelling errors are practically nil! =)