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for A Kind of Alchemy

by Melsiebug

person Lisa
schedule March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think Victor should have gone with them. But thank God they went to see Victor. He was a huge help!

I just hope they can get to the place in time. Sam's running out of time! :(
person Lisa
schedule March 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm actually surprised they let Bonnie go. I thought they would have killed her or something.

I hope she can tell them what they need to know to save Sam before it's too late.

Great chapter London! I was at the edge of my seat! ;)
schedule February 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! Fran and Mulligan better hurry and find Sam before it's too late! I have no idea how they're gonna find him though; wasn't Bonnie hurt or something? Surely they didn't bring her home? So how will Fran and Mulligan get any information when they go to Bonnie's home?

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.....:)
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ack, who is the Master? What does he want from Sam? The drama is killing me, do I really have to wait one more week to find out what happens next? Haha, it's so hard.
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY they thought of the waiter! lol

I hope he can point them in the right direction. I hate to think of Sam being raped and tortured by those people! :(

And Edmund; how sweet is he? I'm glad he was finally able to admit his feelings for Sam.
schedule February 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg, Fran didn't actually think Mother was gonna tell him where Sam was, did he? Mother doesn't give a shit what happens to Sam.

How the heck are they going to find Sam? Maybe they should ask Vincent? Or wait, the waiter from the restaurant; maybe he knows, or saw Sam leave with someone.

Great chapter! They need to hurry up and find Sam before something horrible happens to him!
schedule February 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So what next, more pleases :)
schedule February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Bonnie! Wow, I really liked her instantly. What will become of Sam? He was sold permanently. I guess no one benevolent bought him this time. Waiting for an update is so hard! I want so many answers! Thanks for writing.
schedule February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I know about the changes, but I guess since I'm not an author, I haven't noticed any changes....but I've heard other authors complain about it, so you're not the only one.

Poor Sam! Poor Bonnie! What's gonna happen to them; specifically Sam? I'm assuming they gave Bonnie some kind of drug; she seems spaced out.

This is not good. How the hell is Fran gonna find Sam now?
schedule February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
London, I see what you mean. I clicked on your profile and had to click on the option on the left for your stories, but the rating and the number of reviews aren't shown. I wonder why they did this?