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Hi! Just found your story and read it in one go! No idea why I found it now, although you've been writing it for a while! I LOVE IT! Payton is such a poor boy and Kane...what's with him? I get that he's upset but taking it out on Payton? So not cool! Cannot wait for an update! :)

Oh my gosh, my heart is broken over how broken Payton is and how alone he is. I am glad he has Bryce and Addy but it's not the same as how much Kane hurt him. I don't know what's going to happen but I want Payton to find someone to protect and love him so he can be happy, content and safe.

Oh my gosh, my heart is broken over how broken Payton is and how alone he is. I am glad he has Bryce and Addy but it's not the same as how much Kane hurt him. I don't know what's going to happen but I want Payton to find someone to protect and love him so he can be happy, content and safe. He's like a lost soul now.

I like this and am happy you seemed focus on finishing it. Thank you!

I want to punch Jordan in the nose and kick Kane in the balls for what he said to Payton! My gosh! I cried for Payton and wanted to reach into story and hug him. I don't think I can wait a whole week because the stress will be killing me but I will be patient. I hope Bryce told Kane what really happened but that Payton doesn't accept his apology, at least for a long while. He turned on him to easy and it was wrong, he said he loved him, but in order to love you have to trust and have faith in each other which Kane doesn't have. I am glad they didn't go all the way. I wonder what his uncle is going to say and do to Payton because I know he'll find out.

Oh my gosh! I was so happy for Kane and Payton then Kane had to go and blow it! What the hell is wrong with him!!!!!! Geeze!!! Maybe, Payton would be better off without him because he's shown his true colors with how he verbally attacked him the worse possible way!!!! Didn't he notice something was off with Payton and see the tears!!!!! I am so pissed off at Kane right now and don't think I can forgive him for what he said to poor Payton!!!!

Please update sooner so I can find out what happens next! The wait is going to kill me.

Oh, and I forgot to add that it's all friggin Kane's own fault anyway for his getting probation. I wonder how he will react to know how Payton was punished with the damn paddle.

I was too lazy to leave a signed-in review. What the heck, I haven't reviewed this story since 10/31/2011, seriously?! Oh my gosh, where have I been all that time since I am always here reading and reviewing other stories. Please accept my apologies for being neglectful in reviewing it. I had to read it from the beginning again to get reacquainted with the characters and plot. Oh, in chapter 1, you mentioned it had been two years since you started this story and that it was almost done but that you were going through a second round of editing it so I was wondering is it actually finished but your are just still editing the chapters currently not posted? You originally published it on 10/30/2011 so shouldn't it already be completed? I am anxious now to see how the rest unfolds. I wish Payton had slapped Kane in the face and he better come crawling on hands and knees begging Payton for forgiveness in front of the entire school! Until next time, Katie.

Awe, poor Payton and what an asshole Kane turned out to be. I hope Payton doesn't get punished by his uncle when he finds out.

What a delightful story to read and very well written. I have fallen in love with these characters and feel like I know them. Good job and am sad it's nearing the end.