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I love this and don't think I can wait another whole week to find out what happens to Payton and whether Kane knows what his Uncle is doing to him. I hope he can go back to the academy with his friends and find a new home.

Tristam, if I bake you some home made fudge any flavor of your choice would you please post another chapter sooner as a surprise, pretty please with sugar on top?

I am so worried for Payton and hope his uncle doesn't hurt him anymore.

I work retail and take the bus back and forth to work so being able to read stories I love like this one make my day when I get home from work.

Thank you for writing and sharing this story, it's really a good read and I like it.

Thank you for the update! I enjoyed it.

This is story is so sad that I need a box of Kleenex by my side while reading it but I still love this and just hope Payton as well as Kane find what they are both looking for in the end.

That was just sad. I feel so sorry for Payton, especially the scene with Kane and the tape. I kinda thought that this might happen especially after the quote Payton said in part 8 but it's sill sad.

I hope you had a nice Thanksgiving!

I keep wanting to lock Kane and Payton up in a room and not let them out until they talk again and get their feelings out. It must be terrible hard for Bryce and Addy too. I wish Kane would learn what Jordan did and how he tricked Payton into giving him his notes for his so called friend. Plus, I wish he would find out that Payton is sleeping with the tape under his pillow.

Please let Kane come to his senses and soon before Payton leaves and goes back home to his uncle.

I wish I could read more soon but will try and be patient for next Sunday to come around again.

Grrr! I am so aggravated at how stubborn both Kane and Payton are! It's a wonder Bryce and Addy don't get tired of them and back off until they both smarten up. Jordan is such a dick wad.

I had been hoping that Kane would have come around to at least try and talk with Payton without yelling at him but at least now I see where he's coming from because of what we learned about his and Jordan's 'family history'. I am feeling as miserable as Payton is right now and wish that Kane could see by reading the signs that Payton is suffering instead of believing he 'betrayed' him without trying to talk with him about what went down with Jordan. Is Payton going to request to leave the school and transfer somewhere else and what will his uncle do or say about all this...... See you next Sunday and I hope by then Payton and Kane will be on the path of a reunion.

I've been watching TWD season 4 marathon on AMC leading up the explosive mid season finale so am making this quick! I noticed that you don't have tags listed under summary and hope there is no character deaths in it especially Payton!!!!!! I would just die myself. I want him to be happy with Kane but don't think it will happen so am going to cry my heart out. Please don't let Payton commit suicide or die like that book he was reading and talked with Kane about. Ooops, it's back on, commercial over, so read ya next week.

If they kill off Daryl, I will lead a revolt on AMC, LOL.