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I don't think my heart can take much more of this angst so I hope we see a reunion soon between Payton and Kane or Payton, Bryce and Addy.

Yeah, you updated! I just hate having to wait a whole week to learn what happens to Payton. I was thinking maybe Kane is going on vacation to Switzerland and will see Payton on the plane but then I thought maybe his uncle hired a private jet or something. I just wish Kane would come save him from his uncle and soon.

Thanks for the update! I really love this story so thanks!

Please update soon! I hope Payton runs away and hides where his uncle can't find him before something even worse happens to him. Regarding Kane thinking this; Worse was the knowledge that he wasn’t sure it if he was even ready to forgive. Forgive who? Payton? It's Kane that should be begging Payton for forgiveness for not seeing the signs Payton was being abused by his horrible uncle because they were all there and no one saw it not even his friends and do something about it. UPDATE ASAP!!!!!

Oh, oh, oh, isn't the guy that called Payton's uncle, Gregory Hayward, also the lawyer that was mentioned I think in chapter 2 when Bryce showed Kane an article headed; ‘Jonathan Hart’s legacy to his son’, claimed lawyer Gregory Hayward, ‘will fall under the trust of Lucius Worthing, the closest relative’. I hope this means the lawyer knows Lucius is up to no good in regards to Payton and helps him or finds him a new guardian who really will have his best interest at heart.

Oh my gosh, I want to punch the living daylights out of Lucius for what he's doing to Payton! Geeze, he can't send Payton away to a boarding school in Switzerland because then there will be no hope for him and he will be further away from his only friends Addy and Bryce not to mention Kane. I think Kane is going to regret not trying to contact Payton. Why doesn't he think back to the bruise Payton had that first night and put two and two together especially after learning Bryce and Addy were turned away from them seeing him by his uncle. If he goes to Switzerland, there is no hope left. Oh my dear Lord, isn't Bramwell that scumbag we read about earlier and Payton is spending the night with him!!! I hope he doesn't try and rape Payton!!! If Kane doesn't smarten his ass up, I am going to kick him to the moon and back!!!! I hope you know these cliffhangers are seriously starting to take a toll on my nerves which isn't good because I am nerved up enough dealing with trips to the mall to buy Christmas gifts for everyone.

I am really beginning to think that there is something weird going on with Lucius and Payton's inheritance. The way he was acting it seems like something big is going down and I hope it benefits Payton and that Lucius goes to prison. Why was he tossing papers and files into storage boxes? Why is he going to Prague? Oh, and Ms. Crew is a bitch who needs to be knocked down a peg or two. Thank God that Kane finally learned what really happened but he's still being a stubborn jackass. I am really worried what will happen to Payton if he gets on that plain to Switzerland and hope that Kane/Bryce/Addy stop him from leaving. No surprise, yet again, my heart broke for Payton and the abuse he is suffering by his uncle's hands. What would Lucius' sister, Payton's mom, say to him if she knew what was going on? The suspense is killing me, LOL.

Glad Kane now knows the whole truth! Now he's got to come and rescue Peyton somehow. This should have more reviews. Anyways, please update ASAP!

I was just checking in because it was Sunday but saw your note you wouldn't be updating today. ~ sniffles ~
I am so concerned over Payton's wellbeing and can't believe how cruel his uncle is. I hope he doesn't hurt him anymore and someone stops the abuse before it goes too far.

I cried for Payton, I wish Kane would stop being pig headed.