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I loooove this story. I am really looking forward to sunday! I know you had to take a break to begin the other story, but it feels like it's been forever!

I hope you update this today and post first chapter of new story too! I've been so stressed out with work and reading these gives me a much needed lift!

I am kind of disappointed you haven't updated yet and hope that doesn't mean we have to wait until next Sunday to read the ending! I was also looking forward to reading the next story in this saga. Drat. Oh well, hope you will be busy writing so you can update both of them next week. See you then, I hope!

Thanks for clarifying things for me!

I wanted Kane to just take Payton in his arms and not let him walk away but think he's going about it the right way. I can't believe this is coming to an end soon but will be keeping an eye out for the next book in the series.

Please update this on Sunday along with the first chapter of new story! I don't think I can wait another week to read how Payton and Kane get back together!

Good chapter and it's nice to see them together again even though they still have to work through their problems.

I am very excited over the news you will soon be posting the first chapter of the continuing Winborne saga; Treat Me Nicely. I am looking forward to reading it!

I am so relieved Kane didn't back down (well to an extent he didn't) and spoke to Payton. My heart still is breaking over Payton though but I really have grown to love Gregory Hayward and that he is now a great presence in Payton's life. I will be so happy when Payton is back with Addy & Bryce too. I am surprised Addy didn't try and corner Payton himself just to talk with his friend but guess Bryce probably held him back.

I am rather sad Payton and Kane's story will be coming to an end soon but super happy for the preview of next story set in the Winborne universe.

I hope Kane can break through Payton's defensive shield and show his charcoal beauty that he can be trusted never to hurt him ever again.

Noo please don't wait until the 19th to update this story again! I so look forward to your updates every week :) You're a great writer

Hi, Tristram! Please keep me on your mailing list for all stories you write, thank you!

I feel so bad for how Payton is still feeling and was cheering Kane on in his quest to find and talk with him, and not giving up on Payton. I was also pleased to find out he even went to Payton's Uncle's home to try and see him so they could talk. I had been so mad at him for not trying before so that made me happy. I am so glad he punched Jordan and hope he broke his nose for all the trouble he has caused both of them. Oh, have we seen the last of Lucius?

Please don't make us wait until the 19th to be able to read the rest of this story. Is chapter 16 the final chapter and will there be an epilogue as well? Will we be seeing more of Kane/Payton and Bryce/Addy in Treat Me Nicely?