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for My Lovely Enemy

by Tristram

person Tristram
schedule January 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Anon you need to leave me alone now. I understand it's a disappointment not to get a chapter that you're waiting for and can sympathize with the anxiety you must be feeling in waiting, but it's because I take my time when I write and put in this much effort before posting that makes my story so enjoyable to read. When last week's post was late you wrote me that you'd be waiting indefinitely for the conclusion which clearly wasn't true so why would you think I quit with one chapter left to go? Just be patient and please stop reviewing your anger to me.
person CelticThunderFan
schedule January 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Finally! I get to leave a review! I've been trying all day yesterday but every time I tried to leave on the recaptch verification was missing and I couldn't get it to accept which was very frustrating to say the least.

Lovely chapter and I was smiling for Payton at the end of it. I can't believe there is only one chapter left but at least we have the second book in this series to continue to read.
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule January 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!!!!!
person Anon
schedule January 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you for updating! I was so excited when I saw this great. Great chapter, can't wait to know what happens next. Hope everything is going well for you!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was looking forward to an update. I will keep checking back periodically.
person Nbsiren
schedule January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
*smiles* good chapter^^
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was just checking in for an update but guess you won't be posting anything today. I have to get up early for work so am calling it a night. I will check back again next Sunday.
person Anon
schedule January 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
:( no update?
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule January 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What? No update today? I was getting spoiled by your weekly updates and then last week we didn't get to read this one but chapter one of your new story instead! I do love it don't get me wrong but I would love to finish reading Payton and Kane's story too. Hopefully, we can expect an update by tomorrow sometime? Maybe? Please?
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am very disappointed there was no update on this last Sunday and hope you are not going to make your readers wait forever to update again. I liked the weekly updates. This happens to me all the time and there will probably be no resolution to this for months and months. Very disappointed.

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