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November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh great update!!
Those two are so cute! I love them! XD
I thank you for the update! I enjoyed it alot! :D
I can't wait for more!
Those two are so cute! I love them! XD
I thank you for the update! I enjoyed it alot! :D
I can't wait for more!
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November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I am so sorry I didn't review yesterday but didn't notice you had updated again.
I love this story so much. Well, it seems like Kane is a sort of Casanova so I hope he will not end up breaking Payton's heart.
I love this story so much. Well, it seems like Kane is a sort of Casanova so I hope he will not end up breaking Payton's heart.
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November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh, payton! poor, deprived child - no television! but actually, he's not missing much; still, kind gesture from kane!
they are cute sitting together like that. :3
they are cute sitting together like that. :3
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November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
just started to read this story. Totally in love with it - I can't wait to read more. Addy and Bryce are so awesome - and Kane really has some good ideas to bring Payton out of his shell so that he can experience things he missed.
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November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
GOOOOOOD job!! Please update asap! xD
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November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a great story so far. I can't wait to see where it goes. Very nice character development and very nice job of making me already care about these guys. You have a great talent. Keep up the good work.
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November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aww poor payton i like this story cant wait to see were you go with it
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November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great Fic! I really enjoyed reading these two chapters!
and well seeing "Forgotten" listed in your recommendations, makes us having the same taste! ;) I', looking forward for more updates ^_^
Thanks for sharing :)
and well seeing "Forgotten" listed in your recommendations, makes us having the same taste! ;) I', looking forward for more updates ^_^
Thanks for sharing :)
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November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really intersting story so far I'm eagerly waiting for more!!!
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November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ch.2: Very well-written chapter! I hate Payton's uncle now. What a bastard! He's stealing the company out from under Payton. He abused him, hid him away from everyone so he could do this more easily. Poor Payton doesn't realize just how intelligent he really is due to his uncle's constant demeaning. I hope you have something awful planned for him in this story. Nothing short of skinned alive will do :)