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Ch. 5: Payton is so adorable. Kane isn't such a bad boy as everyone makes him out to be. He's been acting very chivalrous towards Payton, even though he wants him so badly. Their kiss was very sweet and hot! And I love how Addy came and woke up Payton wanting to know all the details about the concert. It's nice seeing Payton loosening up a bit.

Oh my gosh! You updated! Where have you been? I've missed this story.

Have I mentioned before how much I luv Addy?!!

PILLOW FIGHT!!!!!!

I really enjoyed chapter 5 and thought it was the best one yet to date.

Payton is opening up thanks to Kane and I love this story.

Welcome back and I hope you update more often now!

Payton is so lovely. As shy and innocent as he is, he's not the standard blushing "submissive" type of character that's really prevalent in slash fiction. He has emotions, he has complexities, he has problems, he has small joys and wonders and I really liked how he clearly let Kane know that he doesn't want to be played with if it's just a game. Ugh he is just so lovely.

I'm liking how his relationship with Kane is progressing. For now just a fragile, tentative bud growing, but the pacing seems just right and they really do seem to fit well together.

You're back with an update!! :) Well, I'm very intrigued on what the backstory is with Jordan and Kane. And I also like how Kane is determined to corrupt Payton (but in a good way) by exposing him to some fun outside of school.

You're such a great writer. Your new chap just made my day and kane is jealous, that's so sweet!
Sorry i'm typing this with my mobile and it's a bit difficult (i read the chapter in hospital lol)

wow...Kane plays the piano - I liked Payton and Kane's moment in the music room - it was touching and showed Payton a different side of Kane. I don't trust Jordan....and Payton really has missed out on so much do to his uncle....hopefully Kane, Bryce and Addey can remedy that. I did also enjoy the last part of the chapter - at the pub - Bryce and Addey's argument was hilarious.

I enjoyed it!!

All of the characters so far are well developed but I especially like Payton. I have a soft spot in my heart for little guys that are basically shy and even submissive but show a fiery spirit when riled. I look forward to following this story!

Ch. 3: Ahhhh, Kane starts his slow seduction of Payton. And who is this Jordan Abbott kid? I don't trust him. He definitely has his own interests at heart when it comes to Payton.

That was great!!!! Poor Payton has missed so much in his live!!!! He really needs to have some fun!!!! See you again soon!!!