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for My Lovely Enemy

by Tristram

person dazedandconfused
schedule November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've missed this story so much and am glad you're back!
person SlapNuts
schedule November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It's very good and the characters are endearing. Keep up the good work. Thanks for not giving up on it.
person Harriet
schedule November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! I'm so glad you've updated this, It is one of my favorite stories and so well written, I cannot wait to find out the ending and look forward to spending more time with these wonderful characters of yours.
Thank you so much!
Harriette
person Ali-chan
schedule March 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
just found this story and I couldnt tear myself away until I had read it all. beautifully written, very sweet and lovely. cannot wait for the next chapter.
person Tiss
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love it, can't wait for more, especially for some hot stuff:D
person ab30
schedule March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooooo happy you updated it. This has to be one of my favourite stories online right now and it hasn't even been completed! You're doing a fantastic job. =]
person Mint
schedule March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Super happy and excited for the update! Loving this... so PLEASE please PLEASE JUST KEEP WRITING THIS STORY!!

Update asap pretty please!
schedule July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So is this on hold, or straight-up dead?
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, Payton is just so cute!
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's so nice to see Payton having fun with Addy, Bryce and Kade. The poor thing has never been in a toy shop! At first I really didn't like Kade, but now I do. He's been really good for Payton. And my heart about broke she he told Kade to give him a pretty memory to take home with him. I don't want him going back to his Uncle's. :(